This was amazing. It's great to see that Sae might have a positive future. Great job!

This was nice and hopeful, and wonderfully IC. It was good to see an apologetic side to Sae, and the changes that love, even though it was unrequited, had wrought upon her. Good job.

I liked the story, it was very precise and made sense, it had character, keep up the good work, because I will too, I know I am only 14 years - old, but I think I could still have the novel I am producing published, before I turn 15, because I am a good writer as well, and I have witnesses on that topic, well like they say in Japanese, which I am starting to learn, because my first language was english, "Sayonara." (which means goodbye.

P.S. INUYASHA IS SO HOT!(I KNOW THIS STORY WAS ABOUT PEACHGIRL, WHICH I HAVE READ THE SERIES, APART FROM BOOK 7 AND 17, ALREADY, BUT NOW I AM READING THAT FAMOUS SERIES, "INUYASHA," SO NOW THAT IS THE SERIES I AM OBSSESSED WITH, AND THE MAIN CHARACTER INUYASHA WHO I AM IN LOVE WITH!

Wee! This one's sweet! It's great to see it from the Sae-way ;)

yes. awesome. this was bloody great an interesting look into sae's mind. i love the growth of the character and the way it subtly brought up the events that had happened. really awesome you have really good insight into the peach girl world.