that was nice!

that was very good story, i liked it a lot

GOOD FIC! GOTTA LOVE JIM! Although it's hard to imagine Jim at that age it's a very sweet and cute idea! BYE (_)

That was really good! Not many people write things about the tension between Jim and Gene's bond and the difficulties between them as well-the fact that Gene treats Jim as annoying when he brings up money, or remains committed to a batchelor lifestyle in which Jim plays an ambiguous role. You really did a nice job with it.

It was cool.

Awww, liked it! _ Jims my fave OLS character! Im glad he didnt leave.

cute story.

Ah, this is so sweet! Nice story

Aaaaaaw...that was so incredibly sweet i...*sniff*...need to add it to the favorites of me! *sniff* Poor jim...oooO! I luv yer fics girl! 0

::sniffles:: So touching and sweet and sad - it brings a tear to my eye. I don't usually like songfics, but this one was different. Superb. Absolutely fantabulistic.

Aieeee! Very lovely. Great emotion and characterization. One of the best OLS fics I've read.. the first I've been inclined to review. Good job! :) BTW, who is "Drive" by.. I forget.

WOW! That was excellent! You did a great job on this fic! I totally loved it! Jeez you write Jim well! I wonder if that's how he really felt back then! How kawaii (!) and sad at the same time! Very introspective too! This was one of those 'more fic than song' song fics! The best of their kind! Fantastic job on this! Keep it up!

oh girl, thats awesome! *gene nods* *michelle smiles*...gawd, i cannot wait til i get all your fics on my site! Eee! *hugs* was really coola sista!

WAA! That was great! I loved it!

woohoo! great fic (naturally) *mumbles itoldyouso* it is beautifully written. your skill will never cease to amaze me. You are, full out, my fav author here at fanfic.net. congrats on doing such a superb job on your first song fic. may it only be the first of many. _ ja ne!