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| KHwhitelion 2008-01-23 ch 1,  | abuseI liked this. the interaction between Saki and Kyo was very believable. You have to wonder tho, what was Saki thinking about this whole time? |
| Cheshire Grin 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseBreathtaking. Saki was kept beautifully in character and so was Kyou. The style was interesting and helps keep Saki's character so creepy. Anyways, bravo. It was beautiful. |
| liltrix 2007-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, beautifully written. Amazing. One of the best FB fanfiction I've ever read.O.O And the word choice... it flowed so well! And I love the ending and the beginning and the middle and everything!X3 I just love it. Great job. |
| CyborgRockStar 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abusewow, that's kinda deep. great character insight. and your writing is beautiful, very descriptive and well-worded. your fic was much enjoyed. ^^ have a great day! |
| Luna Burgundy Quote-chan 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseAmazing...simply amazing. |
| Nara Merald 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI love your work for fruits basket! This story is also fantastic! |
| Adi88 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseVery, very interesting. I love the way you write both of them. |
| Princess Lightina 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseExcellent, excellent story! I loved it! Despite the whole detention theme that seems to be ever so popular, I think this was quite different from the rest. The characterization was superb! I love reading fics that have to do with Kyo and Hana, not necissarily as a pairing, but just their character interaction with each other. The only thing that seemed a bit out of place was the very last sentence. If you added something like, "Kyo turned right, contemplating her words, etc, etc" or something like that it would've given the story the real impact of an ending. However, I did like the simplistic nature of the ending, and story, in general. Awesome work! Eraya ^_~ |
| hatsuharuluva181 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abusecool |
| maria the dreamer 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abusevery nice writing... inspirational, in fact! beautiful descriptions... it's such a treat when a reader can tell the emotional state of your characters simply by how you've describe how they move. also wonderful how you've incorporated sound. |
| Lady Mazikeen 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseI quite liked this story. Good job! -Lena |
| froth-onion 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI'm impressed. You managed to keep Hana very in character, despite being in a difficult situation - she does not often interact with Kyo. Good work. |
| BlackPanther17 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseYour one shot is SO AWESOME! I love it! You should continue it though, I bet it would turn out as a really good story! Well that's just my opinion! Good story! |
| Elanor Ainu 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abusevery good idea, and great writing style, keep it up :) Angie |
| kayefoxmoon 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great story. You really captured the feel of a Fruits Basket story. But I don't understand the following part: "Tohru-chan... she's fine?" "Yeah. Tohru's all right." "And you," she says, surprising him again, "you, Sohma-san, and Shigure are all right as well?" He blinks, taken aback, before he manages to say, "We're good. Just fine." For a moment, it seems as if she's about to accuse him. Her eyes narrow, then settle again in that half-asleep look that she uses to cover her thoughts. At last, a slow smile creeps across her face. Can you tell me what it means? Or write a sequel? If you anwser me email me at please. |