Poor yugi and your inagery was qiute discrtiptive

Aw! This was really sad!

Wonderful story. Poor Yugi watched everyone he cared about die at Yami's hand. I'm glad he had the courage to end it all. Hopefully, even Yami died.

that was so sad. i loved it. i loved your poem alot though.

Oh no! poor Yuugi! < : (

That was so damn sad
I could feel the pain and everything
AWESOME STORY'
Bye,
yugirules

This one's another great story. I like how the protagonist doesn't really win in the end, and how Yami is evil. 4 1/2 stars.

This was so sad, but in a good way

wow... powerful... so dangourous is the unknown darkness within us all, and you portraied that very well. *bows and kisses your hand*

(tears flowing down her face) ah! poor yugi! that was...AWSOME-LIKE!@_@ i like...no...love this story! are there more like this?

*Miriku is curled on the floor beneath her computer in a fetal position, crying her eyes out*

Kimiru: Er...very...

Me: EVIL! EVIL EVIL EVIL!

Kimiru: Yes. But well written.

Wow...that's probably the most evil Yami I've ever read about!! Well-written for the most part (tenses get a little weird, but I'm not complaining...) and I really like the poem. Good story, if sad. Great job!

Yami...how evil, but for some reason, I love Yami even more when he's evil...there's just some...essence about him...great writing!

How did I not notice this before? I think it wouldve worked better if you had the poem at the end, cause I went back over the fic so I could read the poem in full. I liked the "I win" line, that was... creative. Interesting story.

i loved story can't wate for more evil Yami fanfics from u :]