Wow this is so good!

This is well written and sweet. Are you planning to continue it at some point? If you are, I am interested to see what you will do with this series.

I've been reading all your Twelve Kingdom drabbles, and I just want to thank you for writing them. This fandom is in need of talented writers like yourself. I've truly enjoyed myself, and I can't wait to read more!

This is a true Juuni Kokuki-styled fanfic. The style is like the novels, and it's not a romance fic (i mean, where did all the people get the idea of Taiou/Taiki anyway? I think they have a father-son relationship, and that was it.)

Please do continue 'cuz I like the style, and the novel is so damn frustrating! Ono Fuyumi is dandling her readers from the dreaded cliff-hanger!

Anyway, please continue, and you're on my alert list.

I love this story, especially your take on the relationship between Gyousou and Taiki. I hope you'll continue this story some time ... I'm really looking forward to seeing more. I also appreciate that you're sticking to the story without burdening it with unnecessary romantic complications.

wow! i like the partwhen Asan cut taiki horn... it was splendid... i never though of it... when i read this,, i surely get the picture (even though it just from a fanfic) on how taiki end up returned to horai after sepending a year in mt nou and tai kingdom. and the finale chapter of the taiki's chaper... enki mention that he couldn't sense taiki even in horai and in any of the twleve kindoms... your imagination truely are inspiring to me...

This is good. I hope you keep going with this.

i do love this fic! not very many TK fics out there that arent realy dirty kiren/ruler fics, or dirty fics in general. i love this series, but no one writes fan fics on it! it makes me sad... T~T i hope you update this one!

wow i like it lots! keep it up!

good story. need to make chapters longer. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! you took off from where they left off in the shows realy well, and all your information matches it to. keep up the good work! just try to update more often and have longer chapters.

Interesting take on what could happen in the kingdom of Tai if Gyousou became a tyrannical ruler. Thanks for the story.

Wow. Thank you for writing this.

have you read the Juuni Kokki Novels? Or is this just your understanding of the Anime? In any case its very well written! ^-^ Good story, I liked it alot.

Aw... sheer overwhelming sweetness. I like the way you manage to sum up Gyousou's character in just a few lines - his pride, and stubbornness, and how much he loves his people and Taiki.

I know this is a one-shot, and really, it works very well self-contained... but would it be too pushy to say I hope you write more for the Twelve Kingdoms? This fandom has too few really good authors.

That was such a sad glimpse into life without Taiki. I like the light echoes of desperate hope.