Aww! That was so great! The song fit the ficcie so wonderfully and I love how she chose Jareth in the end.

very nice. I'm a huge Evanescence fan and I love this song, been planning on writing a songfic to it but hadn't had a good idea for the story yet. I liked it and the song complimented the story nicely. And I'm guessing the lines "I will steal away all your pain. I want to hold you high and steal away anything that would ever scare or harm you" are in reference to Broken? Oh well, good job.

Really nice I like it.

that was great