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| .jc.loves. 2007-03-29 ch 1,  | abuseloved it was very good. |
| i-luv-24 2006-05-11 ch 1, | abusewow that was good, even tho it was wrote ages ago, i still thought id review. |
| stellaluna331 2005-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was great. It really sounded like things they would both say. |
| AliciaFB 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was really well written and I could actually imagine them braking up like that. I know it wasn't supposed to be 'funny' or anything but somehow I found the end of the conversation with the "Back in LA, the fridge had probably just been opened"-part a little sarcastic. I liked it though. This was a good beginning, I really hope you're going to continue! |
| Amy 2005-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI can see it going just like that. You wrote their emotions just how I would have pictured it. PLEASE KEEP WRITING! |
| Sara-Girlie 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuseIt's been a while since I read the 24 fan-fic, and yours was the first one that I dived into this time... Great job, not too over the top, believable, which is something that not a ton of people can pull off anymore... |
| linn_lewis 2005-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow.. you have to continue this fic! I love it |
| Joe's girl 2005-03-09 ch 1, | abuseGood start. I hope you plan to continue. I'd like to read more. |