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Reviews for: Mystery Cake and Free Entertainment
Tatsumaki-sama
2008-08-13 . chapter 1
Luffy is such a sweetheart for making a cake (albeit an extremely sugary meaty one with mayonnaise in it) for his nakama. I found it interesting that Zoro was usually the first one to go along with Luffy's plan, being the first one to enter the kitchen, sitting at the table and eating the cake. It's nice to see a fic where the crew just relaxes and have a good time, laughing and goofing off, doing what they do the most. I can just see Luffy trying to escape the horrors of cleaning up the Going Merry and Sanji chasing his ever elusive captain. ^^
funvince
2007-11-04 . chapter 1
Nakama Day would be the best holiday ever. This was very entertaining.
Guardian1
2006-06-26 . chapter 1
"“I almost lost my wish!”" Oh god, this was so cute I nearly DIED.
Digitaldreamer
2005-04-08 . chapter 1
Heh, that was adorable. There are few pleasures that can compare to reading a well written, in-character fic as full of sweet nakama-y good-ness as this one. Very in character, the entire thing was a treat to read. ^^ "Nakama Day" heh, absolutely adorable. I bow to your genius.

*bows*

~*Digitaldreamer*~
Aoikami Sarah
2005-03-20 . chapter 1
"Ima ore ga kimetanda~!" "Dare ga ittan da yo!"
I don't know if you were inspired by the song "Holy Holiday" but if you were, wonderful integration!
I especially liked the beginning, following Luffy's thought process as he's making the cake. A fun fic, very IC and gave me a good laugh. ^_^ Mayonnaise ! Ugh! ^_^
Anon
2005-03-12 . chapter 1
Truly an excellent story. That was so well in character. I enjoyed reading that. Simple and sweet. :)
KuroKame
2005-03-09 . chapter 1
I was laughing so hard that my sides are sore. I love the way you write, I could see the whole story in my mind.

Free entertainment... I'd love to see that.
kosumi
2005-03-09 . chapter 1
AWW!! That was too cute! Luffy's so precious!! I loved it! I loved the ending. Although I think Sanji should have made Zoro and Usopp clean up too. Hahah. This was a really really great fic. And a wonderful wonderful present!
Griever5
2005-03-09 . chapter 1
Haha! That made me laugh out loud! Such a hilarious fic! And Luffy's so cute too! Aww... Nakama Day! =D Great job!
Bevin
2005-03-09 . chapter 1
That was a fun story and you kept everyone very much in character. I really enjoyed it. Not enough nakama stories in here, so it's nice having another one to add to the roster anyway. :)
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