 Silver Cateyes 2009-11-23 . chapter 12... I thought your muses were coming back? Please, please tell me that they haven't taken another voyage off somewhere. Or that if they have, that they're due back soon. You've labeled my two favorite fics (Roommate and Joke) as your top priorities, and I since they're both at critical-turning-turning-point-in-the-relationship moments, I'm chewing walls waiting for the next installment for either of them. Please, please, lure your muses out from wherever they're hiding!
See you next chapter! :tries on Quatre's patented pleading-puppy-eyes look:
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 Z. Shuang 2009-10-09 . chapter 12ROFLMFAO!
Oh wow. I had to stop reading when Duo tripped Zehs. ;;
That was classic! He SHOULD be awarded for that! :D
Well you, being the suthor. lol >D
I like how you slipped some humor in there like that.
Omg what a perfect way to relieve some of the tension. <3
I hope there's more soon~! <3 |
 Z. Shuang 2009-10-09 . chapter 11O...WOW.
That chapter was written AMAZINGLY. :0
I love how you started with a little humor but then things slowly became more serious until they finally blew up.
And we could see it happening. :D
Perfect! \0/ |
 shirubaneko 2009-09-10 . chapter 12 Wahahahahaha! The cute and the funny! I love them! The pranking is absolutely awesome. I've been scaring people by randomly bursting out laughing reading this. I'll be waiting for more! |
 mamawar 2009-08-23 . chapter 11you're going to focus on prank? love it too but won't lie, now i really what to read the next chapter. x.x;; don't take months, please? lol
anyways, the beginning of this chapter was srsly hilarious to picture in my head. actually, just the idea of heero getting pied in the face is deeply entertaining to me. however, i kind of feel bad for him. he of course chose the absolute worse prank to pull on duo which obviously brought out insecure duo which really is no fun. :( really does make sense considering his past so i get his reaction, but i also get heero's. i'd prbly be mad at duo for not explaining why such a stupid prank made him act like that. but this story was become far too happy. i knew drama was on the horizon.
update soonish please? |
 ShianeCollins 2009-08-13 . chapter 12omg that was awesome!! I was cracking up so much when Duo pulled the napkin stunt! That was so AWESOME! I would TOTALLY do that to someone too if I could get away with it and do it smoothly like Duo did. I can't wait til the next chapter. ^^ |
 Nightimewriter 2009-08-07 . chapter 12OMG! I love this story! It is amazing and thank you so much for sharing it!
The way you represent each character is brilliant! Quatre's dual personalities crack me up because I can just imagine it! First, a sweet little angel...and then, the scariest thing ever! Genius!! And Trowa is just adorable!
The Codfish scene literally had me laughing the entire time! I could see it happening! Too funny! You have the characters interacting with each other amazingly!
Duo (my favorite guy ever) is the cutest! His thoughts are exactly how they should be, and his bunny is perfect!
And Heero, omg! Awesome job jumping into his head! The way you depicted him is a direct hit!
Ok, sorry for the rambling! Please update soon! |
 ShianeCollins 2009-08-05 . chapter 11That was great. I loved the beginning with Heero coming home and it was exciting. ^^ The joke HEero pulled was kinda cruel tho...funny, but cruel. i can't wait to read the next chapter when I get home from work :P |
 Turtle Kid 2009-08-01 . chapter 12Yeah, this was a really long chapter. But I'm glad it wasn't shorter--it's a cliff-hanger, but not too terrible. I hope. Well, I mean, I don't know Duo's past, but he seems to think it's worse than being an assasin. So it can't be pleasant. |
 DragonWolfStar 2009-07-30 . chapter 12This was another wonderful chapter. But it also got me thinking: With Heero's reluctance to establish any sort of relationship with people, how did he become friends with Quatre, Trowa, Wufei, etc. in the first place? |
 hollyivy7 2009-07-29 . chapter 10heck. zechs deserves to be knocked flat by heero's awesome smile. |
 hollyivy7 2009-07-29 . chapter 12oh. heero's so cute. *sigh* you are the greatest author ever, to actually write good 2x1 |
 Lunisa 2009-07-29 . chapter 12Mwahahahahahahah! The best chapter ever. Can't stop laughing like evil. Very good turn of the story by the way. Can't wait 'till next chapter. |
 Ragna01 2009-07-28 . chapter 12Don't put yourself down. Your fic is absolutely expectacular! Whatever you write next is going to be excellent. It always is. Actually, now that I think about it, I've been reading your fics for years. You're seriously addictive! |
 Cinnamon Selkie 2009-07-28 . chapter 12~“Nice night?” Duo tried, only half-aware of what he was saying. God, the intensity of those eyes…
“Hn.” Stare.~
So nice to see them chatting comfortably :)
Loved watching Duo drooling over Heero--and whatever he says, I'm sure he looks equally stunning.
~It accentuated his already intense eyes and added yet another sultry, just-out-of-bed touch. Quatre or Trowa had to have forced it onto him, there was no way Heero would have put on anything close to make-up willingly, and Duo made a mental note to figure out which of them it was so that he could buy them flowers. Or chocolate. Or both.~
Hehe. And speaking of "hehe", Duo's voices are getting *totally* out of hand. Not that I'm in any posiotion to criticise...
~“Duo.” Quatre’s voice was like steel, and it halted Duo in his tracks, eyes wide. Blue eyes pinned him. “Please do not waste my time denying that you like him.”~
Eep! Quatre's gone all scary again. I don't cope very well with that. I keep hearing, "You won't forget this day." It's disturbing.
~No wonder he’s a business wonder before thirty, I’m just amazed he hasn’t taken over the world yet.~
Oh, if he had *wanted* to take over the world he ould have, it's just not the sort of thing that would interest him.
~You two couldn’t tear your eyes away from each other! I never thought I’d see the day when Heero would react to someone like that!
Quatre’s words echoed, and suddenly the implication sank into Duo. He snuck a wide-eyed glance at Heero, who ignored him.
Heero had been staring at him, too?~
I was wondering when he'd grasp that. Delayed reaction much?
Ooh, now Heero's developing voices too :)
Loved the discussion about fantasy; that's exactly what I love about it. Actually, I used to hold Zechs's view, but then a friend introduced me to Deltora Quest, and it had so many fascinating ideas, and the next thing I knew it was my favourite genre...
Nice to see that Heero and Zechs are still fighting :D
~“Duo, promise me you’ll call whenever you need a friend.” Seeing Duo’s hesitation, he narrowed his eyes. Duo would swear that shadows gathered around him. It was like being mauled by a kitten with really sharp claws and really big fangs – he was absolutely adorable and utterly terrifying at the same time. “Promise me.”
“I promise,” Duo’s traitorous mouth squeaked.
“Great!” Quatre was suddenly all sunshine and smiles again, and Duo reinforced his mental note to never get on his bad side.~
Like I said earlier...
I loved this chapter, thank you. Cinnamon. |
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