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| Matthew Schallhorn 2008-02-16 ch 10, anon. | abuseWhy you copy-cat bastard! You stole that entire fight and everything they said (of course reiterated, but still in the same meaning) from the movie Van Helsing. The scene where Hugh Jackman, playing as Van Helsing, is fight Mr. Hyde in the Church of St. Sulpice with the Rose window. As much as I love your story "Weak Link", I personally hate this chapter and you. But still you are very good at making Lyoko stories. |
| Kioshie 2008-02-14 ch 15,  | abusethe two that I have read are by far, the most creative, detailed, amazing, shocking, wonderfuly wrote stories I have ever read. Take this as a high compliment, because I read many stories, and I have never said this to any other auther |
| Rose-Rainbow 2007-08-07 ch 15, | abuseI LOVE this story, too!! The mystery of Ulrich's past is finally revealed in such vivid colors that I can actually imagine it happening! |
| hinkle 2007-06-12 ch 10, anon. | abuseFirst I want to say i liked the fight but I cant help but notice some of the similarities between a few parts of the fight and the fight between Mr.Hyde and Vanhelsing just wonderin what was happenin there no offense P.S. Keep writin. |
| hinkle 2007-05-03 ch 15, anon. | abusegood story i liked the first one and this one too hope you post another story this is a personal statemet I LIKE APPLE JAKCS! thank u for your time byeh |
| MooMoo 2007-04-05 ch 14, | abuseThat was so good! |
| wolfwood3189 2006-07-26 ch 15, anon. | abuseI just read all of this story and before I read "weak link" and both were great thanks from wolfwood3189 |
| ulrich619 2006-04-26 ch 14, | abusea great song for the dancing would be helena. great story keep it up. |
| LifeOfLyoko13 2006-02-21 ch 14, anon. | abuseHere's something; I am actually happy that this story is over. I went from Chapter 1 + 2 all the way to this chapter (14). Trust me, I'm glad I did. This was not at all a story that outstanded the others, not even close. Once again, I would like you to take my critisism constructively, but I am not you and you may not think the way, oh I don't know, everybody else does. Just trying to help out, LifeOfLyoko13 - |
| LifeOfLyoko x3 2006-02-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseYes...slightly better than your first chapter. You made fewer mistakes and it was a little easier to understand. Keep going, I'd like to read some more. =] All for the best, LifeOfLyoko13 - |
| LifeOfLyoko13 2006-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseListen, I'm about to give you some constructive critisism. You ABSOLUTELY NEED to spell/grammar check your writing. I like your story so far - it's not one of the most catchy beginnings, I have some doubts - but it's so confusing to read what with the mistakes you've made. Please, make an effort to prevent that and, trust me, you will have more success. Take this critisism to heart [not too much though! ;) ] and please, PLEASE try to make this easier for the readers. Just trying to help out, LifeOfLyoko13 - |
| Laylla 2005-12-02 ch 15, anon. | abusePlease write more to this chapter I really loved it I want to read more! So amazing! |
| Laylla 2005-11-26 ch 9, anon. | abuselater on in the chapter will it take about yumi going to the dance with ulrick when he gets back home? |
| konoha's angel of death 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abusehi |
| Otritzi 2005-11-13 ch 15, | abuseNice story, Read all of it...I feel sorry for Ulrich though, Nobody should have to witness that kind of bloodshed. |