*blink* Wait, so who was the Warrior of Legend? Ulrich said he wasn't, but was he lying? He does, after all, not like to talk about himself. I loved both Soul of a Warrior and the Weak Link.

Why you copy-cat bastard! You stole that entire fight and everything they said (of course reiterated, but still in the same meaning) from the movie Van Helsing. The scene where Hugh Jackman, playing as Van Helsing, is fight Mr. Hyde in the Church of St. Sulpice with the Rose window. As much as I love your story "Weak Link", I personally hate this chapter and you. But still you are very good at making Lyoko stories.

the two that I have read are by far, the most creative, detailed, amazing, shocking, wonderfuly wrote stories I have ever read. Take this as a high compliment, because I read many stories, and I have never said this to any other auther

I LOVE this story, too!! The mystery of Ulrich's past is finally revealed in such vivid colors that I can actually imagine it happening!

First I want to say i liked the fight but I cant help but notice some of the similarities between a few parts of the fight and the fight between Mr.Hyde and Vanhelsing just wonderin what was happenin there no offense P.S. Keep writin.

good story i liked the first one and this one too hope you post another story this is a personal statemet

I LIKE APPLE JAKCS!

thank u for your time byeh

That was so good!

I just read all of this story and before I read "weak link" and both were great thanks from wolfwood3189

a great song for the dancing would be helena. great story keep it up.

Here's something; I am actually happy that this story is over. I went from Chapter 1 + 2 all the way to this chapter (14). Trust me, I'm glad I did. This was not at all a story that outstanded the others, not even close. Once again, I would like you to take my critisism constructively, but I am not you and you may not think the way, oh I don't know, everybody else does.
Just trying to help out,
LifeOfLyoko13
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Yes...slightly better than your first chapter. You made fewer mistakes and it was a little easier to understand. Keep going, I'd like to read some more. =]
All for the best,
LifeOfLyoko13
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Listen, I'm about to give you some constructive critisism. You ABSOLUTELY NEED to spell/grammar check your writing. I like your story so far - it's not one of the most catchy beginnings, I have some doubts - but it's so confusing to read what with the mistakes you've made. Please, make an effort to prevent that and, trust me, you will have more success. Take this critisism to heart [not too much though! ;) ] and please, PLEASE try to make this easier for the readers.
Just trying to help out,
LifeOfLyoko13
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Please write more to this chapter I really loved it I want to read more! So amazing!

later on in the chapter will it take about yumi going to the dance with ulrick when he gets back home?

hi