How's it going so far? For Kami-sama's sake it's... brilliant! You've succeeded wit the 'holy crap' moment. And please, I am so dying to read the next chapter. Hm, what will Hisashi do, now that he knows that Kogure knew. Onegai, update please! And great stuff! ^-^

O.o This was so angsty! Especially the last scene. That's it, update, update, update!! =)

Your language here is better and a lot more fluid.

I honestly can't imagine Rukawa being... you know, all that deferential. But he seemed just fine here.

I usually dislike mush and too much romance, but this was nice. Very nice, actually. :)

Hey, this chapter was hilarious! =)

So very angsty! I'll continue reading. ^^

...cool..

Aw... This is getting serious... but at the same time fun

I'm totally in the mood to appreciate ANY Yaoi story right now (i mean always) but doubt that's the reason y i like your story. nice job.

It's good to finally read this again. So hard to find good MitRu now.

to be honest with you, i've been waiting for this for goddamn months. i mean months, man, not days, not weeks! you're forgiven though. this chap makes up for it. i immediately clicked the link upon receiving the alert. well. what can i say? there's a lot of guilt in here especially with kogure distinguishing it especially for mitsui. this is where the story reaches some level of some infinitely personal depth. i don't suppose mitsui still knows what he really wants. yeah he's probably deeply infatuated with kaede but if he comes back...man, continue soon. the dialogs are really nice. you know me; i love cursing and swearing. this is just the type of first person view that i can wholly agree with. i've read quite a handful of pieces in the Bleach category but nothing really satisfied me near enough to feel the attachment of the narration to the events. your style stands apart from those. man. i guess SD is my fave category after all.

wow...it's really been A WHILE!

but hey, at least you updated!!

this IS just like A Separate Peace...is Kogure gonna tell? is he? o0o0o0o the anticipation...

please update soon(er) :D

me again after so long. ^-^
i really don't have a account anymore. *shrugs*

Anyways, the story's going great! ^-^ I'm feeling great for Kaede, and yet, i have that same gnawing sensation that i think Hisashi's feeling. Kind of sad for him...

Well, the story is pretty good. I didn't expect this turn of events, what with Kaede switching to crutches and all. And the romance part is quite alright. :) And i do believe it is still tame.

Good work and i hope to see more of this again. :D

-M_aKira^-^

wow, that was a rather quick update.

i'm very interested as to how you are going to end this. i hope it's not like the real "a separate peace", because i would rather that rukawa doesn't die.

First, Sakuragi and Miyagi are hilarious, man, the dialogs and puns are very entertaining. Second, Mitchy. He's so effing sweet it makes me want to eat him! The trouble he goes for just to be with Rukawa...it just makes my insides stir hahaha. Kogure makse me laugh too, he teases in a very cute manner. I can sense traces of possessiveness here, things are faring well hehehe for me, that is. The descriptions hit right, I kinda like the delivery. Rukawa is being equally sweet i have no idea what to stammer next! Oh my god, I'm so loving the part when he surprised Mitchy! And hahaha the last part made me giggle so hard. Don't bother to change the rating; the chappie's nothing explicit. In any case, if Rukawa dies, I- I'll cry but then again it's your story so no pressure there. I just love to read about them being together. I'll be waiting for the enxt chappie with much anticipation. and thanks for not abandoning this fic. (off to order MitRu plushies!)

Pollux

sweet! mitchy's pushing his wheelchair! kaede is just sweet in this chapter, i'm giggling now hahaha and mitsui is so caring, i find the gradual development of romance here. keep up!