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Reviews for: The First Time
Fantasy Chick1 12/18/04 . chapter 1
again, good writing, use your own storyline next time. I'll be interested to see you next work
Amber Evans Potter 12/2/02 . chapter 1
Hehe, I think that was cute! . Hehe, thanks for putting me on your favs. list! I love Daughters of the Moon and I hope you get tons of reviews for your stories and poetry!
Luna-Dea2002 2/17/02 . chapter 1
lol! that was way cute. please, do more like that! :)
LaurelCrowened 2/2/02 . chapter 1
That's kewel. Write more w/ vanessa and serena and jimena and tianna and maggie and...okay, so i'm obsessed. big deal. ;)
TheNightIsFading 1/14/02 . chapter 1
This is really good!
Eyez4George 9/26/01 . chapter 1
int this actually in the book?
ggg 9/12/01 . chapter 1
tha twas kewl
Catrina 7/12/01 . chapter 1
One Chapter! You can't stop it there! Most of that stuff we already knew! Please continue!
Ice Princess3 4/6/01 . chapter 1
That was really cute. Good job!
Goddess of Fire 3/16/01 . chapter 1
hey that was good but isn't it just like it is in the book.well good job anyways! i don't mean to be mean so don't get mad! please! keep writting! cya!
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