This arc is insane and I love it. *skips off to read book I*

Interesting and strange.

hellfire

wow very good sequal... it's really good ...

Now… this was a cruel taste of a book. I must say – the ending was all more like the ending of a chapter in a story than the end of a book. While I understand that there is another continuation, I wonder if you really needed to separate it to finish this story. That said: I love-love LOVE the new insight to Quatre’s character. I wonder how… or rather WHY he’s become so suddenly cruel and cutting despite his intentions to help his friends (although I’d surmise it had to do with the intentions of the people he’s been staying with) and look forward to a little more explanation into that. Great Job on this – looking forward to delving into your next work.

It's a great piece of work. Who'd have thought sweet Quat would be so dangerous? It's cool. Keep writing :)

*glowers* You can't see it, but I'm giving you the evil eye right now. I knew it. KNEW it would end something like this, and still I could just pull my hair at how you left it.

I can't even begin to think of what's in it for Quatre to help. Is he there to help bring Duo low, or is he really gratful that Duo showed him the way? Oh, the torture.

I want more, yet I'm afraid to see what comes next. All the fixings that make a great story.

You have me completely off-balance - is Quatre an enemy or a friend? You HAVE to continue this, it's wonderful!

excellent story! please continue - i am most definately enthusiastic about you making a continuation. keep up with the great work!

I was a bit wary of this fic as Quatre is my favorite and there was the implication that he was the "bad" guy.
Well...the story seems more complicated than that and the premise is very intriguing. Looking forward to what happens in the next part.
Am I correctly reading romantic overtones in the Wufei/Quatre relationship or is that wishful thinking on my part? *grins* Love Q yaoi.

cool story so far, sorry been to busy to review lately.

Why the stopping? OH WHY THE STOPPING?!?!?
ME

Oh Gawd, this can't possibly end well. Not with just one more chapter left. Quatre scares me. Really, he does.I'de like to give him a good smack up side his head...but I think right now that would just serve to ** him off...he's already on the war path. Bad. Very bad.

I love the relationship between Tro, Heero and Duo. Though, I'm afraid, it could be Duo's downfall. Its almost as if HE is owned. Quatre knows something...

*shakes Wufie* DO something! *runs and hides*

What? It ends there? NO! I'm telling you, this one has me on pins and needles.*ouch* Lovin the suspense. Will Duo survive? Will Quatre get his head on straight? Will Wufie save them all? Will we get a lemon outta this? Oh, the horror of not knowing!!*grin*

Maxwell - And again, another beautiful chapter. You keep up such a wonderfully consistency.
And it's more confusing than the last! Yay! :)

I love the length, while I love long chapters, I really am enjoying how you're managing smaller chapters, the offering of information, etc. It's done in such a way that is an easy sit down and read, but sticks with ya later.

And the choice of vocabulary! :) You're a vocab whiz. You know this. I know this... so many people know this. So I don't read your fictions blithely any longer. I find a word that seems just a bit off and my mind goes, "Hm, now what does THIS mean?" and it only adds to the confusion (somewhat self inflicted - as my muses take the story all different directions while my sense of wanting things to be a surprise refuses to listen to any and all) which only adds to the fun!

I certainly can't wait for the next chapter! :)

You ARE a dear! Putting in a wonderful word like that and then letting us all know what it is. :s: I've got a few of those marvelous dictionaries about as well. And aren't they just fun to peruse? Love it, love it, love it.

Anyway... I hate that I'm starting to lean the direction you're pushing. Bad Quat! Baa-ad boy! And you! You awful person! You realize of course that I'll never forgive you for this amazing story. It's just fantastic and I'm loving the reading of it and the concept behind it and when are you going to do an original, hm? I wanna see what this imagination of yours does with a few oddly placed, newly created C's can do. You have an inherant voice I dare say, which blooms every time you throw your fingers down upon the keyboard. And I for one, am glad I am not being forced to pay twenty bucks to read it, but am saddened that you're not getting paid to write it!

Another gorgeous chapter, far better than the first two and the real reasons behind that, i haven't a clue as to what they are, other than the flow on this was just very catchy and I'm wishing you'd nto stopped there.

Okay.. tired reviewer.. bed and laundry.. or is that in reverse order? Blech. Keep on! I can't wait for the next chapter!