Reviews for Smitten
Pebbled Sky 7/21/05 . chapter 9
That was a nice one. I forgot that Tohru's name is unusually masculine- good idea with the son and all. I hope in the other stories we can see more of how she "patched" things up between Yuki and Ayame. XD

{Pebbles}
george 7/21/05 . chapter 9
Cute. Glad Megumi got to show.
Doctor Kiba 6/28/05 . chapter 8
This pairing seemed odd at first yet after I read it I thought it was nice...I like the way you write...
mia 6/14/05 . chapter 8
great fic so far, more please :)
Dead Fairytales 4/17/05 . chapter 8
This is such a well written story. I really like this story- and I have no clue why you have recieved such a low amount of reviews. Perhaps a change of wording in the summary?
Slow Motion Runner 3/24/05 . chapter 8
Yay! Yuki and Ayame are resolving their differences one thing at a time!
Suzaku no miko 3/21/05 . chapter 8
A great Yuki/Hana piece! I thought it was awesome how you put them in this situation, yet you managed to keep everyone in character. Excellent job.
Pebbled Sky 3/21/05 . chapter 8
Whee! Ayame and Saki interaction, and brotherly bonding! Joy!

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Keep up the good work!

{Pebbles}
Pebbled Sky 3/12/05 . chapter 7
Aw! _ I like this story a lot. Your characters aren't OOC and the way you write out the scenes keeps true to the nature of the manga and anime (I think).

Nice work!

{Pebbles}
Tsuki of the Roselight 3/12/05 . chapter 4
Alright! I love Hana and Yuki fics! They rule!
Taulir 3/10/05 . chapter 6
I can't say I've ever read a fic with this coupling before, but I was intrigued...and I loved it. As unlikely as the pairing may seem, the way you've written this makes it seem possible...and comfortable, which wasn't something I had expected.

I hope to see this updated soon!
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