I loved it, really.

Wow.

That was incredibly written! And I'll freely admit I was on the brink of tears!!

Just...wow!

hey i really enjoyed this, at first i didn't know where you were going with it but this sounds like it's gonna be really great. keep it up

That was good. I loved/hated the ending, if that makes sense, lol. While I want Gordo to be happy, I loved the sad ending and how you wrote it. Great job.

Really cool!
I'll read the second chapter when I get home...
(I am on the computer at school.)
Now, I have to leave before Mrs. Figglehopper comes over here and finds me illegally on
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

Another great chapter. I am anxious to see what is going to happen. I really enjoy your writing style.

Very well writen :)
Possible to fall in love again...well i really hope so ;) Lol. I'm kinda in the same situation as Miranda.

This is really well written, I am interested in reading more. I really like the flow in your writing.

By the way, it's Ethan Craft, not Clark.

Very nice take on things. The only thing that stands out to me is that Ethan's last name is Craft on the show. I liked how you portrayed Ethan--the way his popularity faded out in high school, the way you didn't go for the dumb jock angle.

I'm curious to see what happens in the second part. Is that the end of Miranda and Gordo?

Very nice. I like the part where she realizes she and Gordo don't have as strong a friendship. And could feel the sadness as she drifted from the couple.

Interesting start. BTW, Miranda comes into the picture sometime before kindergarten. In the Magic Train episode (forget the name of it), it was implied that Miranda and Lizzie were best friends during kindergarten. I wouldn't worry about it cause I like how you wrote this. End of Part One? Can't wait to see the next part.