 EMOGURL117 2009-08-14 . chapter 16 DIZ IZ AWESOME
I LIKE IT XD |
 DemonAlchmist1 2009-06-17 . chapter 16 I really enjoyed the way you encorperated natural teen functions(such as the non-virgin Ino,and lesbian Sakura rumors.)I also liked the part where Naruto disclaims that book but Gaara understands the murderous intent.You really good at capturing the essence of the characters and their personalities.my two most favorite parts of the story were when Sasuke put his arm around sakura's waist and hinata's fantasy of a sweaty Naruto being drool-worty. |
 You freindly ass 2009-06-06 . chapter 8 Great story but I wanted to see some jutsus used... Or the nine tailed fox do something. Cuss that's the whole reason narutos dad is dead, and his mom. Plus neji and sasuke arn't special without the sharingan or byacugan. Garaa shouldn't be scary is he doesn't have sand powers.
You now under stand my name! |
 sal-e13 2009-05-18 . chapter 16cool i just cot up with the story.
i think it is really funny
but u should put more sasusaku in it sorry i dont mean 2 rush u
i get from your revews that u havent updated in a wile (like 3 years)
but i hope u can up date soon
and i will look forward 2 that |
 Mrs-N-Uzumaki 2009-01-31 . chapter 14Ah! Update! I'm like totally dying here!
At least give us a AN or something, 'cos I'll understand if you're busy. |
 anko2468 2009-01-18 . chapter 16 OK, I'M GETTING SERIOUSLY PISSED OFF HERE! IT'S BEEN ALMOST THREE YEARS! NOT EVEN AN AUTHORS NOTE, TOO! GAH! |
 Choco-Pocky-Usa-chan 2009-01-03 . chapter 16okay i'm sorry for complaining in my first review but this story really doesn't have much pairing in it except Naruto sorta has a crush on Sakura Sakura acts like a crazy fan girl to Sasuke and Hinata likes Naruto for his body basiclly...
I like it sort of it is good humor i hope you update i'm reading for the humor now i guess. But if you could maybe add in some fluff moments or something or show some things that the characters will get together that would be nice. Here are some things i would like to see Hinata liking Naruto for his courage or detirmanation, Sakura stops acting like such a fangirl, Naruto befriending Gaara (like them working on their project together.), Naruto and Sasuke becoming friends. oh and since i haven't read ur other fics i'm wondering Amaya Kiba together |
 The One 2008-12-31 . chapter 14 Super Pervert? YES, IT"S JIRAIYA MOTHA FUCKAS! |
 inuzuka kid 2008-12-27 . chapter 16 awesomeness |
 .Shezzâ„ 2008-10-18 . chapter 3 that is a great storie (:
i really liked it :) |
 mikko 2008-10-17 . chapter 16 i liked it keep writing i achuly enjoy reading when there were in high school even though they never went in the show that's y i love fanfic |
 Darian Henry 2008-10-08 . chapter 1 i'm sorta slow but what do you mean its discontinued are you not gonna wright anymore please do most of my friends have read this story and LOVED it but they got upset cause it said discontinued so what i'm trying to say is please wright more it was one of the best high school fanfics i've read cause it really is just like a high school and not all fake and crap! |
 Richie 2008-08-19 . chapter 2 dude ure stories are great and i think ure creativity is awesome. The greatest part is how you took the naruto series and made it into a real life situation. Anyway, im looking forward to reading on so hurry up and make more chapters. |
 joseph33759 2008-07-29 . chapter 2I can't seem to message you, to tell you this:
One, none of your stories deserve to be burned.
Two, you are a good writer only reason I am not reviewing your original story(Bad Luck) is because I do not like gay stories, just doesn't catch my eye unless it is around a masterpiece level.
Three I do not wish to continue any of your stories but if you happen to continue any of them message me and I will be happy to read any of them even if they happen to have Yaoi pairings.
Last thing I could use a beta on Fictionpress, for some of my stories, care to take the job? My Grammar sucks that is why I am asking for a beta |
 Mrs-N-Uzumaki 2008-06-29 . chapter 16No! It had to stop there! I was looking foward to the naruto-sweating part! (For obvious reasons xD)
UPDATE SOON! |