Omigosh! This story was so touching!

And I really love how realistically you made the asylum. Most asylums out there really aren't designed to make patients better and so it was nice to see you acknowledging that.

This made my heart feel all sad and then happy and then sad and then happy again. rofl. Very well written. ^.~

aww this is so sad! :( but its sweet at the same time :D
i loves it.

That was so sad... asylums are evil. I've never seen an asylum story, so this was great.

...I honestly do't know what to say. It's briliant. Brilliant, spell-binding, all in all, I think you must be some kinda... some sorta genius! It's so vivid and so gripping, I loved it. You have talent.

How sweet! I love it!

Poor Remus. T_T

Oh man.my heart was racing all throughout this story...i read one other story about Remus being locked up, but it was nothing like this...the horrors in this...makes it feel so real...wow...wonderful job on this!! you can feel the adrenaline and anticipation all throughout it!

aww! what a cute story. :)

^.^ wow, i enjoyed reading that. ^.- u did an excellent job, i thought the details and everything in general was great.

oh my goodness, that was pretty much the best and most disturbing story I have ever read...but it was just so darn good. GOD I love your work, its absolutely breathtaking.

I'm usually not big on non-magic AUs, but I really liked reading this. That graffiti with the Grim Reaper...shudder.

that's so sweet, even though im not a big shipper!

*sniff* that was so sweet story, yet so sad! I just wanted to cry for poor Remus! I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end!

And I haven't reviewed this...

Not a whole lot to say, actually. I love, love the creepy descriptions - and even if they aren't typical of insane asylums, I truly don't think anyone will nothing or be immensely disturbed by the difference. Scarily detailed, and the overall story had this air of... strangeness about it. Very, very awesome. (As response to Silver Wolf: the feeling is quite reminiscent of "Night". Very straight-forward, very sad and melancholy and terrifying. *pokes Lauren* It's by Eli Weisel, and I hope I'm spelling his name right. Read it.)

The only peeve I have, as I believe someone else mentioned, is the fact that they did seem to get away from the asylum a lot easier than would be expected. Not a horribly bad thing, just a faint... I don't know, something I wasn't expecting.

Fantastic story: very original, very interesting. A million kudos for that!

wow!

That was amazing; have you considered becoming a writer? In all honesty, that was one of the most polished, sophisticated fanfics I've ever read in my life. All I could think of was the novel "Night." Have you ever read it?