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| Neroli 2005-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice use of River's observations on how Simon sees things to bring a very real understanding to how SHE sees them. |
| Sayra Louise 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abusei like. |
| EreshkigalGirl 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseMore please! |
| hereswith 2005-03-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is great, I like how you describe the contrast between the two of them, and how their perspectives on the world differ. I'm really looking forward to more of these :-) |
| brigand 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is so lovely. I like the way you've captured the differences between how River and Simon perceive the world. Simon very concretely and River in a much more abstract sense. You have truly captivated me with your series and I think your River voice is one of the best I've encountered. Bravo!! |