Ah, the sound of madness.

Why is it always the bitterness with you?

Just kidding :p

I've always known these things, yet whenever I read or see them it always seemed that I never noticed them before...

Huh... very interesting.
I like the flow of it.
quite angsty.
XD

Wow, this was very imprresive. I have never heard of a humorous tradgedy. I must say, this is very original.

Too many parentheses ruin the emphasis that they make.

Wow, this is quite deep, and leaves me thinking. The magnitude and the profoundness in which you describe tragedy and humor is different, yet good, I enjoyed it.

How do you think of these things? It boggles the mind!

Creepy, yet wonderful.

Nice trying to explain Kikyou in this life, of how much she changed, or perhapes she didn't change at all.

MJ

Wondrous.

It's so genius.

It's so depressing.

I'm afraid because it's true...

This is so wicked... and true, frankly. Not to be, er, cynical, but seriously. It's all there.

Wow, that was truely well done! Your a very good author! Keep it up!

gah, my head hurts from the thinking. this is a wonderful story! kikyou is a really difficult character to understand, it's nice to see someone give it a try. her cynical thoughts and knowledge of the human heart make this story just awesome. great job all around! :)

That was thoughtful...hmm kinda made Kikyou less cold.

freakin awesome