Even though its a simple plot, I find that its a good one and I think its very original. I liked it.

Good story, well-written and exactly like one of the real 21 JS episodes. Good job. )

It's a good story, very well written, but I'm a little disappointed with the ending. I thought there might be something between Tom and Tessa. Not exactly a romantic relationship, but at least a friendship at most. Only, it kind of ended without her having any resolution. I know her attacker was arrested, but that isn't really the ending. Not for her at least. I hope you continue this.

And, I'm sorry for bashing and stuff. I'm just sad because this story was really great and I was shocked when I saw the word, "FINI". I just want more.

This was a great story. Very well written. You should be proud :)

I am very much immersed into this story. You're doing a great job and I can't wait to continue.

So far this is a great story. I look forward to reading more

Loved the ending! You did a great job of making this sound just like an episode of the show. Thanks for a good story and a fun trip down memory lane.

"Thus, the sound of his superior’s voice calling him abruptly caused Officer Hanson to startle as he slid the carriage of the typewriter back home and yanked the completed document from the machine." Oh yeah... I remember the days when cops used actual typewriters. LOL (Haven't watched the show since it was originally on, can you tell?)

Good chapter, I liked all the realistic details you put in.

I really think this chapter would have worked better if you'd written the conversation between Hanson and Fuller, rather than telling about it after the fact. Still, a very good storyline.

Tessa is lucky that there's an undercover cop on hand, isn't she? Good chapter.

Nice start!

That was really good! I could actually picture that story being an episode of 21JS. I'm putting you on my favorite authors list, so write more!

Short, but dang good. Catch ya on the flip side!

Great ! Don't stop it I wanna know what's next !

I'm am really enjoying this story...You've got interesting characters and are engaging. I hope you keep up with this