I knew those two would make a perfect couple.

A little confusing, but that comes from it being a challenge fic, I suppose. Took me a minute to catch on. Sigh. You are the best slash writer for this pairing. I shower many praises upon thee.

neat. but you might want to make is clearer who the narrater is...some good lines:)

I really liked this...very true to Magneto and Charles' characters. Oh well..we can dream can't we :)