I have some things that might make it sound better. Injected with antibiotic...try agent, or some neutral word for medicine. That's all...for now O.o

ALRIGHTY, Time to shame your beta-reader. *snicker* (jk)

In the very beginning you're using was alot, try not using passive speech. Ask Minty, she'll know what you mean. The second and third sections...paragraphs..whatevery are a little choppy, I'll help with those later. Third Section, Silver Knight sounds a little broken, distorted.
And apparently I have nothing more to say...because I have nothing. *sigh*

Is this your edited one Nio?? The part talking about "a" silky spider web...well there are several cords and stuffs. Lookie at that and...i know you said somthing about "click. click" of heels. I think you might want to keep that in here. WELL...That's all. lol Great story though. You know I absolutely ADORE this story!!.

O.o weird