Heart goes bye bye That was so funnay!

I just realized that I never did review this story. My favorite fanfic of all time and I never reviewed it. Yeah, that's right, I'm a jerk. But...I never realized before that your code wasn't entirely original. It is either based off of or extremely similar to the nintendo code (up up down down left right left right b a). I have to go reevaluate my priorities now...Jk, this is still my fav fanfic ever. Good luck with whatever you are doing now.

Bye for now.

Good start. I would have started a war with Sora though.

i read this story on .uk and i was wondering where the second one was. so i found it here and it's really good =] cant wait to read the second one

Oh my...where to begin?

Okay, about a year or so ago i was on Kingdom Hearts Ultamania, a little after KHII came out, and my insain obsetion (sp?) for KH had only just begun. Back then i didn't know what a fanfiction even WAS! Well, anyway, you're story was the first fan fiction i ever read. Now i thought it was only on KHU but somehow i stumbled upon it on fanfiction, and now I'm FIANALLY able to reveiw it. Yay!

So here it is!

Okay, now you're whole story is very funny. At least i think so. It's well written too, very few mistakes. I like Sora's line in chapter one, because that made me litterally lol.

laugh out loud. My mom got worried.

WITH THAT HAVEING BEED SAID...

Emma's obious Self-insertness makes her a bit mary-sueish. Not horribly bad, but a little (you know the bit about the magical superpowers and being able to defy everything in the game?) i'm not trying to be mean, and i have no idea how much you have improved since then, but still. However she still IS an interesting charecter.

ASIDE FROM THAT...

It's still a well written and entertaining story and i loved it to bits =D

Okay enough of my crazy ram,beling and weirdness and long reveiw-ness. Please do go on!

(ps: OMG you're so mean to Kairi T-T why does everyone hate her...)

wow! that was ace!! love it (=^.^=)

can you carry it on :D ( it would be great id you could )

Man, bullied because you like Kingdom Hearts...I know how that feels.

Anyway... care to write a crossover fanfiction with one of my KH characters? I have very interesting ones...

YaY!I loved it!I can't wait to read the second one!...yes,it's Spring break,I have way to much time on my hands,and I read this entire story in one day.Oh!One question:What is Rikku saying in that last chapter with her in it?That keeps bugging me.


Your crazy,insane,physcodic,sugar-high
reviewer.

Kimiko Kinomoto
(A.K.A:IzzyIzzy)

awesome. . .i also kno how to speak Al Bhed! F00D(W00T)

I haven't actually played any Final Fantasy... This is really confusing...

Uh oh. I smell a plot twist... :^)

POWER! BWA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I like those stones. And that idea! YAY! HARMLESS BUNNY BLITZ BALL! *gives harmless bunny plushie*

Arrgh! The curiosity! It eats away from the inside out! Yay for the next chapter already being there!

Shadows are so much fun to defeat! I love to kill swarms and swarms of them! *throws squeaky Shadow plushies everywhere* YAY! SHADOWS! Er... Um... KILL THE HEARTLESS! ME-HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE! *more evil laughter*

Emma has a bit of a temper, doesn't she? I admit, I didn't expect a fight!