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| summershine 2005-03-17 ch 2, | abuseamazing chapter, i love it. my top pairing is HG, and the RH, so I'm very happy at the moment. Keep up the good work! |
| Vicky Potter 07 2005-03-11 ch 1, | abuseWell, I must say that when I realize that the boy lying with Evie was Ron, it didn’t like me. I think it was because he seemed to be a coward. Yes, I know, we’re talking about Death Eater’s and a live or die situation, but… I don’t know! But then, I kept reading and I understood the whole situation and all Ron’s thoughts and it was ok. You know, I was happy again xD It just… fit. (Well, that’s not the word I should use, but I don’t know how to say it…=P). Oh my God Jenna! That scene about Ron’s death! It’s just wonderful, really. The way Harry and Hermione react and all the things… I really enjoyed it! It was so emotional… And when they arrived at the Burrow, that’s awesome. The thoughts of the 2 of them, how Hermione is sorry for not comforting Harry and how he is so sad and still try to be there for her… And Ginny and Harry holding hands!! And the scene when Fred is with Hermione, and he told her that Ron loved her!! No words… Oh, poor Evie! No one is going to believe her that she woke up with the bruises! I don’t know why, but I just want Evie to fall in love with Avery! Yes, I know, I’m crazy… This is the 1st chap and I’m already thinking about ships and all of that, but it was a crazy thought that popped in my head! It’s that Evie seems to be a little upset with him because he told their teachers about the bruises, and I love when there’s a situation of love-hate between 2 people… I think that the more different the persons are, the more they are meant to be together (Don’t know if that grammar is ok). What a wonderful scene the last one! I mean, Evie is like Ron’s guardian angel, isn’t she? It’s so strange the whole situation… You do have a HUGE imagination!! Now I can hardly wait to read the next chapter! I want to know many things… I want to read the re-union of Ron, Hermione and Harry (especially R/Hr!), I want to know how Evie is going to be in their magic life… Is this going to affect on Ron and Hermione relationship? I think maybe they realize they are meant to be together and they confess their feelings… I mean, you almost lose the love of your life, for Merlin’s sake!! I don’t know, I really like this story! It’s wonderful Jenna, congratulations! You are wonderful, I mean it. And now, I left you with a paragraph that I’ve write before finishing reading the story: [[That Bellatrix, what a **! I hate her so much… Since Sirius’ death, I think… But, wait a sec! Is he actually dead?? I mean, when I read about the death I didn’t worry very much, because I suppose that he wasn’t. I mean, he’s one of the main characters, for God’s sake! You CAN’T do this to me, Jenna! I’m worrying now, really, and I don’t want to cry for him… Oh, please, please, please, be nice and bring him alive again! Would you? ]] Jajajaja! Yeah, I know, I’m so stupid. But then again you choose to be my penfriend xD! See you, girl! Take care and keep writing, for Vicky’s sake! (And that would be ME! =D! ). xoxoxoxoxo Vicky. |
| summershine 2005-03-11 ch 1, | abusevery interesting. keep it up! |