awwww... that was soooo depressing yet so sweet...

An intersting story, keep it up!

I WANT A HAPPY ENDING.. :(((

Its your fault you make me cry! Thxx for evrything! :)

dammit...u've successfully made my eyes itch...because i read this WHOLE chpter with 3 blinks only...it's SO absorbing and depressing that the ice-cream in my hand was melting without me knowing it...plus the ice-cream and the theme of story was completely unsuitable...wait!i wanna click somethin first...there, done..!now u're my officially favourite author...God knows how much i love this...thnk u soooo much...and please write more stories like this one...

i love it but so angsty

it isnt the complete story isnt it?,,pls continue!i want to know if they can live happily by your thoughts.!but for mine,i want to realize ran all..all they do to protect her,,and make a sacrifice for her love,,thatzs only a suggestion!i love it!

Very nice. Can you do an add-on including reactions and stuff? I like tragedies...

So... sad... *sobs rivers of sadness* no Conan-chan! Anyway, I really liked this fic... even though it was depressing... *sniffle* :o)

awesome!

it is very sad..

'(

Oh my... that was really something! I loevd it! It brought all emtions in me... I LOVE THIS! Keep writing! awesome XD

T.T

so sad...

well written

That-that was so...sad!

I loved the idea of splitting the letter up throughout the story. At first, kind of confused me, but I eventually figured it out and was touched by the time the 'Sayonara, Ran-neechan' line came.

You did a fantastic job at making what the charcters did and thought during each desperate situation very realistic. I love how you had this huge time gap between Ran getting the phone call and Ai arriving at her doorstep, most stories would've had thosek inds of things happening way too fast, espeically since Conan/Shinichi needed time to write a letter like that.

The part with her just suddenly learning that Conan was also dead was a little unclear to me too. I think that that line was the only part that was rushed out of the whole story.

Also, the beginning was just a little too 'jump into the plot', it felt like the whole thing kind of started too early. I know that it was a one-shot but it kind of lacked a little intro. So all in all, the whole thing in terms of the organization plot kind of confused me.

CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

It's very :-(

nice!

and now i'm gonna go cry.

written beautifully, darling.