cool

go xander nice job with the gun and the vampire and his lair!

Cool,as a Executioner book fan I liked that Xander became Bolan. Update soon maybe have Xand go to the Farm and meet the rest of the

Not a bad story, but I hate to say it, it sounds A LOT like the start of the Journeyverse! Check that out and you'll see what I mean.

Interesting. Much better than the first story because of details added.

Nice work. More?

wow this rocks i can't believe that xander did all that he did in two nights please update soon.

Nice. Real nice. I like the style of writing you're using and your attention to the small details is definitely making this a story to watch. More Soon Please!