Even though you said it's a sad ending, I thought the reunion between the lost loved ones was beautiful.

Nice AU look at the story.

Really great story. I like the way you put two different endings.

amazing story!

I LOVE this! I LOVE the happy ending though! I'm not one for sad endings! POST MORE ASAP! I LOVE how Alex/Heph/Edoura came together as though they were joined by their souls when they first met eye to eye! POST MORE ASAP! I wish she had a bit more parts in the fic though!

Love ya,

Sam

WOW! i loved it! it would be so cool if you made a sequal to this story following the sad ending, about the lived of the children.

*sobs*

This version was indeed sad. Very sad. But very beautiful. I read this ending while listening to Lost. Gosh, I almost cried.

I think I also prefer this ending, it's more realistic.. this ending is just.. beautiful.

This is the way Hephaistion should have died in the movie. I got kinda irritated by Alexander who was talking to himself looking out the window while poor Hephaistion died.. (

) Great story Nelia. I hope to read more of your fanfics soon.

Rock on!

Ha this ending was perfect for the story. Fitted Alexander perfectly. I like the little twist of his children disappearing!

Go you! Great ending! I like it better than the happy ending! :)

I didn't knew Solon was an ancient greek name! That's cool! D Well, I suppose they're right when they say you're never too old to learn. Uhm, what am I saying? I'm only 16 years old. lol _

Oh! *applauds* I love this ending! It's perfect. Cheers! \o/

I really liked it that you 'brought Olympias back'. I like her.. P Loads of long ancient greek names in this chapter indeed! Hehe, kewl! D

I will read the other ending of this story, although I did really enjoyed this one. *winks*

Oh dear, talk about a happy sappy ending. I like it, though it's not really Alexander-like. I still think his dying young was part of the bargain for his conquest, much like it was Achilles bargain to die young for a lot of glory!

Btw, not to complain. But re-read your chapters before you post. Quite a few typos!

Aha! It's the insecurity! Well, there's no need to be insecure, I love your stories, and I know many others do so as well. )

I loved this chapter! Another son. Great! *smiles*

Solon eh? That reminded me of Solon, the ex bandmember of 30 Seconds to Mars P

Oh and the song Eudora sang was beautiful! _ I can't wait for the last chapter, the two endings. )

Pregnant? Again? Boy they sure don't waste any time do they?

Loved the chapter as always! :)

I'm glad you've updated again so soon!

Why don't you like your chapters anymore? (

I really liked this one, Hephaistion is so sweet! _ Yay!

Well, that was certainly a homecoming to remember. Awaiting the next chapter!

The latest chapter is not bad. But I am afraid it's extremely indiscrete to tell the girls their father by blood. Children never know how to keep secrets. Moreover, it might hurt them much that they were bastards because they were too young to understand the love between Alexander, Hephaistion and Eudora. If I were in Eudora's shoes, I would tell the girls after they were at least 15.

Do you ever like a chapter you write these days? This was great again. Phai is sweet.