|Reviews for The Black Piece|
| Anna Claremont 4/9/13 . chapter 1
And now the Thieves going to thank the HC?
What impressive demostration of Rogue powers. Asume the're more to come YAY!
| anlmoon 2/5/13 . chapter 17
Awesome story! IT IS GREATLY WRITTEN. LOVE ALL THE CHARACTERS AND THE INTERACTIONS ;) Thanks for writing this.
| angel897 9/2/12 . chapter 17
intresting story to read
| jacksperluvr 11/5/11 . chapter 17
| slightlyxjaded 11/13/10 . chapter 17
I loved this story! Interesting idea integrating the Hellfire Club into this...they have an agenda and powers all of their own. Another aspect you played out that I really enjoyed reading about was switching Remy and Rogue's roles. Instead of the usual story we're all used to, you made Rogue the (almost heartless) merciless killer. It seems as if only Remy would be able to accept her after all she did (and Logan-go figure hahah)...which is why they are so perfect for each other.
Besides describing the characters quite well, you seem to have a knack for writing fighting scenes. I feel as if I don't get a good dose of violence in enough of these stories, but man, you offer a lot lol.
In general, I really like how you twist some of what was already established by the comics-after all, this is a fanfiction site. Thanks for writing this story the way you did and I can't wait to read more of your works.
| Kii-g-14 10/23/10 . chapter 1
| team underdog6996 4/4/10 . chapter 1
this is a great story its not your normal romy but its awsome! :D
| samantha 3/12/10 . chapter 3
just started reading your story today, and so far it's very good! i really like your style of writing and i can't wait to read more! and yeah, i did notice remy's name on the computer list in X2, and i like to think that it's just a profile on him that they got when they may have captured him in the past, but i don't really think that they still have him, i mean, it is gambit after all i'm sure he got away...
| Ele 11/28/09 . chapter 17
OMG i luved it, i cant believe you left it there though im hoping your gunna do a sequal cuz im missing it all ready, (deep breaths) okay... well anyway thought it was great and cya
| SilverWolf77 8/12/09 . chapter 17
Oh wow I loved it!
It was so dramatic!
Plus, lots of Romy ;).
| XOXheartAmy 5/21/09 . chapter 17
Wow! That was a pretty intense story... Lots of blood, gore and Romy
I'm pretty clueless about the person that freed Carol in the end. At forst I thought it was Mystique, but it's a guy. Then I thought of Graydon Creed, because he hates mutants, but he doesn't have a beef with Rogue. Now I think it's Warren for some twisted, bizarre reason... I'M CONFUSED!
If you still need to know, you can download all four seasons of X-Men: Evolution from iTunes. If you go on the MARVEL channel on YouTube, click any one of the X-Men: Evolution episodes and then one of the links in the video description you can find them. All four seasons together cost about £65
| Amakusa 3/21/09 . chapter 17
Y'know, lately I have been disappointed when reading a story by others. It seems SO good then the ending just blows apart. This is NOT the case with yours. I enjoy endings like these. It keeps in line with the story, at the same time it leads to one questioning what happens next and keeping from becoming too focussed on a mysterious ending, with a little bit of tragedy added in. I like that. It seems in keeping with Carol's character (albeit, I'm not a big fan of hers) but the tragic thing is, she still doesn't realize that she is being used, again. I have one concern, though and that is Emma. I don't like Emma, at all but her character seems to have done a 180 from the beginning of the story. I will reread, though.
| RogueNya 1/2/09 . chapter 17
Good story that you have done.
| Star Garden 11/17/08 . chapter 17
I LOVED this story! I just couldn't move away from it, so I went through it all in one sitting. It was well worth the strain on my eyes though! I really loved the way you wrote this story as a kind of what if sort of thing, but you incorporated all of the stars from X-Men that we all love so much. I love the serious scenes, and the the humorous scenes and the way you put Rogue's relationship with Irene and Emma.
I also really like how you included Cody in everything. Like a sort of reminder of the past and happier times. A lot of other stories tend to ignore him, but I like ho he played a small part in the story.
I just really loved this story!Thanks for writing!
| Star-of-Chaos 11/1/08 . chapter 17
That was a really good story. Rogue behaving badly on a power trip was fun to read, along with the interaction between the other characters. And the action sequences kept me glued to the page. The only thing that's bugging me is in the last chapter, since it doesn't say how much time has passed since the battle, it seems like it's been too soon for Rogue, who last I remember (without going back to check at least), had broken ribs, jaw and ankle, to be up, walking around and having sex. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it :-)