Aww, poor Squall. And Seifer. But I really loved reading this, nice work! :)

wow. That was... tragic. But epic, at the same time. Great work!

Wow.. so tragic yet moving. Squall definitely reacted like how I assumed he'd be.. the angst was good here. I feel sorry for both.

So good..there's just not enough violence for me. The angst is wonderful, but I'm in emotional overload. Kudos to you!

-K-

I was, luckily, referred to this from someone at livejournal, and wanted to share my thoughts (in case you wish to know this is tiara_hikari from fanficrants)

Very beautiful, completely incredibly IC for Squall (as well as Rinoa! She wouldn't kill herself out of the blue!), and a wonderful portrayal of the events, in a very FF8-esque way (with the sortof warping scenes, the dreams and scenes in his mind, everything).

Finally, Squall reacts the way he would have in reality, when he loses Rinoa! (so sick of her dying and him being relieved so he can go be with whatever other character the writer likes).

Very well done, very tragic, but I can see all of it happening, just like that, with the GFs and Squall, his mind, and everyone around him. It's great.

Got refered here by someone on fanficrants on LiveJournal. Good story, sad, but good.

And to think, it's all my fault. ;)

You already know, or ought to anyhow, that I dig this piece immensely, especially now that you've added a bit to the GF scene. Great work on the characterization, especially on Seifer.

For some reason I'm also particularly fond of "People keep doing that to me." It's just... very Squall.

terrible and beautiful. very tragic. only suggestion is that you edit it a tad more - a few typoes and suchlike. but lovely.

my god its so sad! but it's done so beautifully...nice writing, but some more chapters would be nice. But hey! that is the *only* critasisim i have, and i mean, i usally constanly whine, so hey!