 Tie-dyed Trickster 4/21/12 . chapter 7(chuckles) I laughed many times reading this, especially with the later chapters when Hak Fu shows up and Valmont de-petrifies. It's a really fun fic - I will admit, I entered this with some minor expectations of squickiness, though your note in the first chapter was greatly encouraging (hence the making it to chapter 7). I'm really glad you put that note in, because I would have really missed out if I'd not read this. I love how you're characterizing Jade - so very much herself from the show, yet obviously more mature and older and such. Valmont's been fun, too, for what we've seen of him - it'll be interesting to see how being a statue for 7 years has and hasn't affected him. I know it's been awhile since this updated, but apparently there've been gaps in updates for this fic before, you're still writing and posting other stuff on this site, and you stated in earlier chapters that you want to finish it, so I'm hoping you continue it. Because it's a wonderful story, and I'm sure there's quite a few people (myself included) who are hoping to find out what happens next! Again, great story! :) |
 yamiduke13 4/21/12 . chapter 7This made me laugh haha. I know you haven't updatd in a really long time but I'm still going to hope that you continue one day because you did a great job with this. They are both in character and they are both so amusing and it's just awesome. |
 mushmonster 8/22/11 . chapter 7Interesting, very interesting. I can't wait to see where you're going to go with this! Hope to see more soon. |
 Melancholy's Sunshine 6/20/11 . chapter 7I fucking love this story! |
 Kaiyosei 4/19/11 . chapter 7 I really have to say, this is my favorite Jackie Chan Adventures story of all the ones I've read so far (and that's at least 20-30 by now). Though the interaction between Jade and Valmont has been limited to the most recent chapter, your descriptions of the characters are so spot-on that I can visualize every single scene in this story, and every line actually being said by each character. I don't think I've ever encountered a story from this series or any other where the characters, despite being thrown into unnatural situations, are so convincing. Things aren't moving too quickly between them, and the Jade that you portray fits exactly with my own view of what a future Jade would be like. Your Valmont, of course, is just like he is in the show, since he can't have changed too much as a statue. Your writing style is excellent, just decorated enough to give the story flavor, and not at all cluttered with unnecessary descriptions.
All in all, I really enjoyed reading this story, and it's too bad that you haven't finished it since I'm definitely hooked. I eagerly anticipate your next update, though, and I hope that you won't be discouraged by the fact that you haven't updated this story in a while. I know how difficult it is to start a shelved story again, but I hope you find some inspiration to do so since in my opinion this is one of the best JCA stories out there.
-Kaiyosei
(Adding this to favorites when I log on) |
 scaryghost 12/18/10 . chapter 7I find this extremly entertaining. It made me laugh and now you have me hooked. I hope more chapters come soon...verry soon haha |
 LolFrogs 11/7/10 . chapter 1 Um. So, I'm just wondering if you're planning to finish this story. I really enjoyed it. |
 Paparate 9/20/10 . chapter 7I believe that you're story is THE BEST Jackie Chan story that I've ever read (and I've read all of them in ff.net...seriously)
The characterization of Jade and Valmont is so believe, hilarious dialogue and my god! I love the storyline. I can't wait to see what happenes next. I hope you'll finish this story. I could wait for years (but preferably soon)
Thank you! And please update soon! |
 nightchildx 9/19/10 . chapter 7I really love this! I hope you update soon! This may be one of the best crack pairings I've read so far! |
 DecepticonFan 9/14/10 . chapter 7 Epic Win! Please update this fic soon. I read from chapter one to seven and was extremely attached. Whenever I read a good story my mind plays a movie of what I read. This is one awesome, enthralling 'movie'! |
 Turtle Kid the Woolgatherer 7/27/10 . chapter 7I was unsure about this plot, but it's actually good! And the way you write is so engaging! I reread this chapter three times. It's just so pretty! I can't stop looking! |
 jeweliasands 7/14/10 . chapter 7 Gah! This is wonderful! Beautifully written, excellent grasp of character! Can't wait to keep reading! |
 Jynx101 3/14/10 . chapter 7UPDATE! ...pretty please? (.)? |
 Varify My Soul 1/27/10 . chapter 7THis is a really fun story, a good plot a wonderfully cute couple and the writing capabiltiy to take things slowly in the right direction. please continue this.
kudos |
 saisei.shinsei 1/19/10 . chapter 7In such a small fandom, it's great to see a well written piece. I love it! Really hope you update again.
-SS |