Nice story. I like how it ended. Wasn't any need to continue. The Red-Coat/Blue-Coat was kinda weird to me, but there is nothing wrong with trying something different.

great chapter! cant wait to see what happens between lady and the twins please please update this soon!.

MSh

short sweet, i love it. i enjoy fics about the riverly between dante and vergil. Avery good start to a very interesting fic

I can't believe I never gave this a proper review before! I remember reading it a while back and just going, "Whoa..."
Great style and atmosphere all around. :)

Nice story...

Pretty good so far, interesting :D I like lady's last words, lol, quite funny. Can't wait until you update.

Pretty good. I really liked the last line.

This mission in DMC3 was one of my favorites so it was like viewing it all over again in my minds eyes through your words. Normally I hate reading or writing battle scenes, but I just love dmc3 and your writing of it! Love the ending of this where Lady says "Ladies first." Awesome!

^_^ Good as always, I love this one though, it's quite good at description and the action scenes. ^_^ Love ya as always!

Hm (smiles happily) The last line reminds me of a line that once happened in an RP.

Bad guy: What're you waiting for? Why do you wait for me to go first?

Dante: (smirks) Ladies go first.

ANYWAY

I adore this. I love the way you make the weather reflect the violence of the right. I think your fight scenes are amazing. You got talent. Bucketloads of it.

this is a very nice short chapter. you did really great!

wow i missed this short chap! i luvr short chapters!

I know that Vergil loves his brother goddamn it! Great short fic. Read it before but didnt get around to reviewing. Love it.

hope thers more of this where its coming from. rocking bad **!

Yay! You finally updated! This is good. I like it, are you gonna write more? PWEASE! Love ya! ~A.D.