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| Morrow-kun 2008-07-07 ch 8, | abuseGreat story. Lots of suspense which I do enjoy and you're writing style is enjoyable. I hope you decide to continue this story and eventually end it. =D |
| AiEdogawaIsaBellaCullen 2008-06-08 ch 8, | abuseThis fic is soo... HEART POUNDING... DOKI DOKI DOKI DOKI... Doki Doki doki doki... yep! I like it lots!! no.. I don't ... I LOVE it LOTS! YAYA! Poor Ai, I can't even begin to imagin what she's going through... WOW... Poor Ran too! Though she should still marry Dr. Ariade... Conan X Ai for life! Yeah!\ Thanxs! Update soon... ONEGAISHIMASU! Thanxs! |
| AiEdogawaIsaBellaCullen 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseHaibara Ai AKA Sherry but born as Shiho Miyano HAS an american name... It's Anita Haley... EEW! Like the Japanese name better by alot! Thanxs! |
| ComicXArena 2008-04-14 ch 8, | abuseAre they finally going to interact! So far Shinichi and Ai had only talked once. Does Gin have to die before Shiho can come back?! Pls update soon. PLS PLs Pls pls... |
| Black Topaz Dragon 2008-02-24 ch 8, | abuseOMG! You finally updated! *squeal* Aw. Poor Ai-chan and Shinichi...;.; ...On brighter notes, This chapter was awesome. XD |
| Claude le noctambule 2008-02-24 ch 8, | abuseWell, thanks to insomnia, I've finally read this chapter sooner that initially expected. Xp I'm pretty curious about the MIB's boss, now that we get few hints about the kind of person he was. And it makes me smile to read this familiar quote again. X3 Gin's situation become more interessing with each chapter, and it was kind of touching to see him making his first step, alone, in a world where the organisation is gone. But well, organisation or not, our favorite hitman is still on the hunt. I ponders how it would end for him.^^; You already know my thoughts about the Ran/Shinichi/Eisuke interactions. X3 I've adored to see Ai suffering from PTSD and the eeriness bring by an innocent child song. Agasa's dismay and sadness was fully understandable and we could get why he's tired of the situation since they couldn't escape from the unavoidable issue forever. Shincihi's characterisation was lovely by the way, and the little scene at the end...So cute...^__^ (sigh) We should be patient for the next chapter, ne? Well, takes your times, I wouldn't dropped this story until you've reached the end.Xp Thanks for the reading.^^ |
| FirstSilvera 2008-02-24 ch 8, | abuseUh... Finally an update, and a long chapter, too. :D I almost forgot all of the plot. I like the quote at the beginning of this chapter, and the part about the Boss' wife, which was very fitting. Gin grows more sympathetic with time, and I would be really sad if you attempt to kill him at the end of the story. XD Besides, I sense a pleasant Eiuka-Ran development in the story, although that might be only wishful thinking. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see whether Shinichi will tell Ai about her past or not. |
| SN 1987A 2008-02-24 ch 8, | abuseUpdate! \o/ Loved the chapter. (It made me want to write something. O.o) Am curious about the Boss. And what else is in the black box. And what Ai knows. And what will happen with Eisuke and Ran. And Gin. 8D |
| Firey Chronicles 2007-10-02 ch 7, | abusewhine~ update? |
| Firey Chronicles 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseer? name changes? |
| Sariii 2007-06-15 ch 7, | abuseA very intriguing work. I'm not so sure what to do with shipping for DC/CC so...but I really like Ai. hehe. I'll leave that to you I guess. Hope to hear from you soon. |
| SN 1987A 2006-12-31 ch 7, | abuseOi, why didn't you tell me you updated LAG at the end of October? Sigh. It was a very, very satisfying chapter. Evil cliffhanger at the end, but I love the plot twist at the beginning. First time seeing someone going with the idea that Gin will be the "Silver" Bullet. I wonder what was the story of the BO. So Gin escaped and went to Eisuke's place, then Eisuke went to find Shinichi. I wonder how much time they have before Gin recovers and seeks revenge, if he seeks revenge at all. And why is Akai glad that Gin wasn't dead (yet?)? (A question: was this chapter written before or after your discovered the floor plan of Agasa's house?) |
| Fredryck 2006-10-29 ch 7, | abuseWow, you updated! I can't believe it! :D Well, I loved this chapter; the plot is deepening, and Shinichi is very Shinichi. I also like the whole Gin twist. So he was the silver bullet, after all...I wonder what he's really up too. I hope Ai will get her memory back soon. Please don't wait another 10 months for the next update! |
| FirstSilvera 2006-10-29 ch 7, | abuseFinally - after a long wait - there is a new LAG update, and a very interesting and long Chapter also. Gin's future intrigues me, and I'm looking forward to the Gin-Ai-meeting (I hope there will be some). (I feel like updating ENCOUNTER, now that you've updated "Like a Gun" :D). |
| CSMars 2006-10-28 ch 7, | abusewow, cliffhanger!! please continue soon, I love the character Haibara and am so glad she's a main character in your story!! About the "romance" part, would it be haibara/conan aka miyano/kudou? *crosses fingers* |