That was very well written. :) It was angsty but yet romantic and hopeful all at the same time. Lovely job! :)

really good

well duh it is about time for them to finally get together

That was a lovely short story. Sad and sweet at the same time.

i love it..lol !

Oh! I don't think she was out of character. I loved every bit of this. Oh oh oh, this story just filled me with happy... I was like "AW!" and my heart fluttered.

Loveloveloveloveolveovleolevolv.

Ah my heart just filled with happy when I read that there are more chapters. Yes, I have more to read!

Beautiful work. That was a real pleasure to read.

Nil: I did like the first chapter better, but Riza wasn't that far out of character. I loved the last line, 'its about time', that made my day!

That was so sweet. And poignant. I like poignant.

:waves a little flag:: Yay! This is an excellent fic, write more for these two, hm?

Actually, I don't really think that was out of character for Riza. People tend to act a little differently when someone you care about dies. I think that was all a pretty good rendition of what might have happened. :)

I really enjoyed this! It was sacharin without being sappy and really hit on the chemistry between these two. You had a lot of really amazing visual images, particularly Mustang asleep against the glass in the train and sleeping with his head on the bed, body on the floor. Something about the way she observed him, thinking about how uncomfortable he must be in both instances, that was very endearing and sweet. Hope you have lots more pieces on these two to come! :) Thanks for writing and posting!

That was wonderful. I actually almost did cry after remembering that episode. I'm also sure of that last line in the second part with Hughes. It is about time.

I give you the biggest bravo ever. BRAVO!