aw! i was so sad when you ended the first one because idid'nt think there was gonna be a happy ending!tnks for writing this!

I LOVE THIS! Bierrez and Rath are the most adorable pairing I have ever seen! Well Kai-stern and Rath are cute too. But Bierrez and Rath are better. Also, PLEASE FOR THE GODS ABOVE WRITE A SEQUAL! *Begging* Also is it OK if i use a small part of your story? Gust the neckless part if you dont mind. For a Berrez and Rath one that I am thinking of writeing. I have it pland out put just havent put it on paper yet. Please reply!:)

MORE PLEASE! *holds out hands* Miu! I likey.

Great story! I loved this and Counting the Stars! You are an amazing BxR writer!

excellent story your a great author!

Aw! will you continue the story?! wana more, love this pairing!

THAT...WAS...SO...COOL! But i think you should make Rath a little bit older in the fic, because it just makes me feel weird imagining Bierrez doing all those things with such a tiny Rath. Oh yes, why haven't you started the next sequal thingy? Do you know how long I've waited? you're making me angry by doin' that. Well, START ON THE NEXT SEQUAL, OR I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!
(typed that phrase once more!)

This is a great story, as was Counting the Stars. You seem to have a bit of trouble with phrasing things, but other than that I see no technical difficulties. So, now that I have finished my duty as a fellow author of critiquing you, and I meant to misspell that, I have a favor to ask of you.
May I sort of steal this plot and write it? I think that this story-line is an awesome idea, and I want to try stuff with it. I tend to have a habit of reading things and then getting little subplots for them going off in my head, and then the ideas will torment me for weeks unless I write them down. So, please?
And lastly, PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER SEQUEL! I LOVE THIS STORY- LINE!

this is utterly adorable! I love it!! :D please do write a follow up to this!! I can't wait!!

I love it!

Cwoot. I liked the first one better, but that may just have been because of the more intense plot. Anyway, this was a nice follow up, and I am quite frankly AMAZED at how FAST you got this out. *shocked*

-Ally