yous ghellie is the bestest houseelf i is evers meeting!
i is loving yous story.
missus ghellie is being the bestest of bests houselves.

This was a really fantastically written story. Well done! You captured many of the thoughts/behaviors that go along with anorexia rather well. I'm glad you stuck it out and finished it, even if it took you as long as it did; that means that people like me can come along years later a lose a day reading the whole thing!

...I have a feeling that things will go downhill from here. Poor Harry.

so far so good...the plot is unraveling nicely...oh my u have talent ! :P

The plot bonny stuff kills the emotion of your chapter. Cute but not appropriate. Perhaps, instead of using nonsence words and sentences just leave it blank.
The story is very nice other than that.

Wow, 2 years of effort - and a good story is the result! I have been following this story for a year and just recently saw that you had finished it in February. Congratulations Ghellie on finishing it. Really liked it, thank you so much for sharing with us!

I loved aussie!snape and your backstory with his sister was quite interesting. don't know quite what to make of the abuse that happened to snape, wonder if it will feature more in the next story. which i am about to go read! so glad you have written a sequel!

i think since snape waas drunk that he was having flashbacks of his drunk uncle

hi, is the gutterflower thing another story?
If it is it sounds great
have you done it?

Personally I think this sucks...I stopped reading at the third paragraph. I don't mean to be harsh, but I actually really love Harry Potter, and I wouldn't say this sucked unless it really did.

this was/is very good, can't wait till sequal, if you need a beta, i'm happy to help?? go you!!

OMG, make Severus take action already!! Even though this is a pointless review since the next couple of chapters are already written, but really, this is driving me crazy!

Severus did not intend to do as Harry suggested? Frankly, I'd be disturbed if Severus actually intended to "** himself with a rune paddle". If Harry had that much power of suggestion there'd be no problem with Voldemort whatsoever. Or anyone else, really.

Miss Lisa Sutherland would love to beta for the lovely ghellie. I'd email you, but its not working, sigh, the ways of technology, btw, I loved Dizzy up the boy, great job!

This is the sequel pre-view?! AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT THIS WAS AN AMASING STORY!

Awesome storry! epic even