I totally cried at the ending! I knew that Dally was going to die, but I got sucked into the story. You are such an awesome writer!

wow that was oddly good i like it

wow this was increadible and i like this ending better

im trying so hard not to cry but im failing misrebly
~nellie

first of all YAY FOR ALTERNATE ENDINGS!
lololol and second of all this was so fuckin
sad! i was sitting in my room like :0 NO
but also YES...cause I like Aubery but i love
Dallas and now hes alive. I loved that you made
Dallas cry that was pretty sweet. All around good job!

and i liked Summary: It's the alternate ending to Battle Scars. I've started writing fan fiction about my own fan fiction.


that was really funny

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wowza this story had me in such a tight hold that all last night i couldnt sleep until i finished it today...amazing, just amazing

barley mary-sue, totally original, great character and setting details, i could go on forever literally

loved it!

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thats like the saddest ending ever! the point of writing these, i think is to chnge the authors ending, not go through the whole story and have your favorite characters die in the end with only the one you don't like left to help the main character. sorry if that was a little mean, i just sad and forgot that people actually do make Johnny and Dally die!

This. Was. Totally. Awesome. And that's all I have to say.

Great story. This is the first outsiders fic I've read, I just finished the book like a week ago. I had to read it in school but I finished it like right after they gave it to us because it was so good. Great story. Aubrey is probably one of my favorite made-up characters in fanfics, so thats good. I'm going to read the sequel now, yay.

omg! I LOVED THIS STORY! it was so sad though, i m on the verge of crying. i hope u write a sequal! amazing story. xoxoxoxo

Buthow could you kill Dally?

T_T

it made me cry! -sniff sniff-. I'm glad I encouraged you and can not wait for the sequal!! Your an amazing writer!

ah damn now Hope is playin an it made it even sadder then On My Own! ... what does it mean last they saw? does she die? what? no? make a sequel! or answer my questions!

this is so sad! On My Own came on right as it was Steves pov an it made all the more sadder!

Oh my, Steve apologized! You should make a sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Lucky Dog, getting to see a Green Day concert! Well anyways that was an awesome story. Made me want to cry '_'