WAR ! YAY! Lol. Nice chapter:)

Dirty war, huh? Where there’s Emma there’s bound to be dirt ;-) Can’t wait to read the next chappie so update ASAP!

oh man, when Jean will know it she'll feel betrayed and her powers will come back I guess MUAHAHAHA for EMMA

JOTT FOREVER

carry on

Wen

I'm going to make myself a shirt that says "Team Grey" and wear it around until you update.

I just have one little thing, I love your story (especially the emma/rachel humor ("dodge the lightning bolt" *snicker*)) but i think that the character's reactions to jean coming back were a little too watered down. It would've been fine in the comic universe when a dead person comes back every other month but not so much for Evo. Other than that, amazing job!

-stray

("Scott’s future wife and the basic reason I’m alive?" *snicker*)

HAPPY BIRTHDAY sometime in this past three weeks...

My favorite characters from this chapter:

1. Rachel - the little bit with Emma at the end was great _

2. Tabitha - how can you *not* love her? And you write her so well _

3. Pietro...I don't want to say that you "humanized" him this chapter...but you showed a side of him that isn't usually portrayed...and I loved the spark between him and Rachel

4. And Lance - just because _

I could go on and on about how much I LOVED this chapter...but I sadly don't have much time...just know that I was so excited for this update! I greatly missed the Jottness :(

*DOJ*

Hey congrats on the social life!

Also congrats on another lovely chapter.

I really think the part about scott having his memory erased was really weird and a little ooc for both him and the prof. But it did make for a good scene at emma's return.

Can't wait to see the cat-fight and what happens when Magneto returns from whatever he's off doing.

Another awsome chapter, and your not the only one who hates writing transitional chapters. The others chapters that suck to write are introductions...I hate them.

Is Rachel going to hook up with Pietro? I totally loved how Rachael was acting when Emma came back! Update soon!

I love the jott and lancitty in this chapter- it's so sweet! The alone time that Jean and Scott had with each other was pretty good too ;) but rachel's time with her mom was the best. I can't wait to read how Jean and Emma fight with each other over Scott. But of course Jean will win ) UPDATE!

Jott 4Ever!

as a big fan of x-men, i luv this! even though i hate the character emma frost, i still luv x-men! pls update soon! can't wait to see what happens next!... and i can't help wonder if the returned jean is actually pheonix or not, like it was mentioned in the comics and the x-men 3 movie... hmm... something to think about... keep up the good work, and update fast pls!

Hi there. Sorry for not reviewing the past few chapters. But I just finished reading them and must say that it was a complete blast. Loved the return of the Brotherhood and the return of Jean. I wonder however, how this will affect Emma and Scott’s relationship. I have a feeling its not going to be anything good.

Anyways, as for Rachel in a fic. Well, to tell you the truth, I have the entire collection of Excalibur (thanks to EBay) but I have never once touched them. So my knowledge of Rachel is pretty much for the X-Men comics - which, I must admit I don’t even read that much anymore. So I won’t exactly say that she’s my most favourite character but on the other hand - she’s not my least favourite either. If you want to go ahead with a story, please do right ahead. Who knows - maybe you’ll get me to like her more through your fics. Though, I do hope she’ll be a little less whinier than she is in this fic :P.

Take care friend. Keep up the great work and I do hope to read more from you soon.

iloveitiloveitiloveit!

-stray

Things are starting to make sense now. For the most part. Lol. What happened to Kurt's accent? By the way, I think Rachel is a great character..

Was Scott sincere about what he said to Kurt? We'll know it

Can wait to read their reunion, and Emma's reaction lol

Yeah I like Rachel, but for me she can't be as much powerful than her mother. I know that she's the daugther of two omega's mutants, but it'd seem strange

CARRY ON

JOTT FOREVER

Wen

Now things are definitely going to get interesting...can't wait to see what happens when Jean discovers Emma, lol. Update ASAP!