very good story!

Even though you haven't done it since '05, I'm still hoping you'll update again. You're a good writer, and the character developments in this story seem thoughtful. I would like to see the 'capture scene', as well as more of Nathanial's past.

oh come on, please you have to update this please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please... was that too many please's sorry, but you have to update this I absolutley love it!

This is very good. But why haven't you updated? It's been months.

Oh I love this please update it soon I do not know how much longer I can wait even though i just started reading it... But anyway update. Pwity pweez. *gives puppy dog face* and if you do not update i have been know to nag with e-mails.

update soon please.

WHAT HAPPENED WITH THE KID'S MOM?
Also- I have several title suggestions:
Light in the Darkness(although I'm also considering that one for my fic)
Unexpected Light(or Unexpected Friends)
Not All Is Lost
Hope
Not All is Dark

*raises eyebrows*
THERE IS NO SELF-RESPECTING GIRL ON THE FACE OF THE PLANET WHO WOULD ACT LIKE THAT!
*grumbles* She's such a beer cup girl. Or fruit cup. Whatever.

V. good. First fic? You're really good.
I'm actually writing something rather similiar right now, although it's not posted yet...
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! If you need any creative help PLEASE e-mail me. PLEASE.

Yay! You updated again! I liked the part about Cassandra--reminded me of on of those 'rabid fangirls': "He's so pretty!" LOL

I like, please update soon.

So far it sounds like a good beginning. How did Leggy--err that is, Legolas :D--get captured? Well, I hope you post the next chapter soon so I can continue reading it!

Interesting. This should get more reviews.