it was good, but who was it that freya was grieving about anyway?

Ohh... I sang the lyrics to the song *is a bad singer though*

"Deep in my heart is a longing... (to last one) Our love is withered and dead" it needed one more line before "So I wander"

But It's great ^_^ *just Freya has a spear... not a sword*

his is so amazing! I just freaked out because someone wrote lyrics to The Place I'll Return to Someday, and now theres words to Freyas theme! I'm ecstatic! thank you! you rock!

Those are some pretty cool lyrics, they really suit Freya's theme. I like the rhyming couplets you managed to include as well. I might try using those lyrics the next time I hear Freya's theme...
Thanks for reviewing my story.

At first, I was like, "eh, it's alright..." Then I popped open my Creative PlayCenter and listened to Freya's theme. The words came out so naturally and fit so perfectly, it was awesome. And I don't even know how to sing! Haha...

Anywho, very nicely done. You cheered up my day...even though the lyrics are slightly...not...cheering.