In your authors note you talked about character differations and your right. Thats why it confuses me when i try to write a story. I'm almost an expert on the anime the manga as well as for the game I have only played one of em but I still know quite a bit. Writeing characters can be so hard, espically Enzan and Blues. Good ficy.

Swimming in molasses...hmm. *We later see my cusin doing a belly flop off the diving board into her pool while I doggypadle my way through the yummy tasting goo* =3

Great story. :)

I've only read the summaries on Rockman.EXE Online, but I like how you captured Enzan's frustrations and your depiction of both of them. I enjoyed. ^_^
The variations in all his manifestions do make his characterization a bit harder to get a bead on, but that's part of the fun, I guess. ^^;

This is great! I love your Hikari Enzan story. It was just so emotional that I cried! Please make more stories that can be touching and emotional for reviewers!^-^

This story is one of your best! It reminds us that there are things in the world that cannot be explained. Like Enzan in this story, we seek to explain the unexplainable, to understand why things are the way they are. There are mysteries surrounding our world that we want to solve. And, as always, the truth continues to elude us. But it never stops us from trying to find the answer. Maybe someday, some question will be answered, but it will also raise even more questions and thus, the cycle starts all over again. The world is much more mysterious than one is led to believe. All you do about it is go forth with an open mind. I hope you take my words into heart as you go about your life. This is the Blue Phoenix, signing off!

Brilliant, as always. I really liked your description of Full Synchro.

I also like the idea behind this fic a lot. I've always envisioned game-verse and especially manga-verse Enzan to just be completely exasperated that this Hikari kid can just come out of nowhere and do this stuff seemingly without any effort (not so sure about anime-verse--Enzan's a bit more laid-back there and not so completely focused on Netbattling). I think you did a really good job of capturing that attitude.

And Blues. Oh, man. I *love* him in this fic. Not "love" as in "want to snog his head off," but he's just so spot-on. I can't articulate what it is about him that just seems so right, but wow.

I know I'm totally gushing, and I feel like a bit of an idiot for doing so, but since I'm trying to avoid Axess spoilers, it's been awhile since I've read anything new of yours, and . . . well, I guess this is what you get when that happens. ^_^

YOU'RE ALIVE! Lol. Great story as always! ^-^

^_^ What can I say? It's very cool! I love how Blues is just like, Figure it out yourself, dammit! *grin*

Blegh...I can't think of anything to say that I haven't said! Good job, I guess...? Hehe...

Nice. Afer finding and reading all of the translated manga, I found that this story has quite a nice touch. Perhaps it's because I thumbed through the manga quickly, but I felt that perhaps Enzan was a bit more headstrong and stubborn in the manga than you made him out to be. Nonetheless, a good story, and as long as this isn't a one-shot, I'd like to see more. And good job with the manga-based work.

Well, that was certainly interesting. I don't think I've ever read a manga-based EXE fic. I'm not exactly expert on EXE (heck, I only started watching the American dub NT stuff shortly before the Axess series began), and I certainly haven't ever read the manga, but I liked how you characterized Blues and Enzan. ^_^ I don't know exactly what it is, but Enzan's character feels... familiar to me. Sorta like a long lost friend, or long forgotten favorite character... I just can't remember. But I loved Enzan. ^_^ Poor guy... will he ever understand Netto and Rockman? Does he even know about them being brothers? I wonder...

Anyway, this was a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, though I half-wish there was more. Good luck writing your other fics!