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| Tristan 2008-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseUhh... Btw, why is it that in the summary you say that there are three suspects, and then you list Sonic, Knuckles, Amy, Tikal and Shadow. Funny, I thought they were five people, not three. (I think you might have made a small mistake there =D ) |
| Gahlik 2005-09-04 ch 1, | abuseMWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!lol.this is so funny. you ned to write morte fics like this |
| Dean 2005-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI also knew it was Tails he is a fox after all and he proved one thing that he's an even better Thief then Rouge the bat is. |
| EagleFox 2005-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI couldn't help but crack up when Tails asked Sonic where Sonic was at. You should write more fanfictions like this one. I suppose I'll sign in and add this to my favorites. |
| LonelyArtist 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abusefunny! go Tails! |
| Lorilei Mackenzie 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseHaha! Tails is the theif. Haha! That was awesome! |
| darkcurls 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAAHAHHAHAH! that was mega funny! write more! |
| Dragonmaster-Sain 2005-03-14 ch 1, | abuseLOL! i knew it! heh, the last line reminds me of "Tales of Symphonia" haha. |
| Phantom86 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI knew it! The detective was the culprit! One of the oldest tricks in the book! (No offense. It was still funny) |
| C. P. 2005-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseTails would never do that! Well on the second tought, maybe yeah, I mean he's always the innocent one, now he shows his true identity, Mwahahahahah. By the way I hate Tails, oops... you didn't needed to know that ^_^'. Anyway I only saw one wrong thing, at the begginig you said: "...and the three suspects are, Sonic, Knuckles, Amy, Tikal and Shadow." Shouldn't it be: "...and the FIVE suspects are, Sonic, Knuckles, Amy, Tikal and Shadow" Hope I could help ^_^ |
| RuinsofTikal 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abusei knew it!! i knew it was tails!! is this gonna continue? if so CONTUINUE!! |
| ... 2005-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou should get Rouge to turn over everyone to the police and arrest them. >:D |
| Story Weaver1 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseLOL! The slight Rouge+Knucckles at the begining was funny. The ending was too. |