Beautiful.Thank you.

Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Very intense! I didn't see that coming with Mac, the slap, the rest sounds like him! Perfect!

great ! wish it was a lil bit more romance between Stel and Mac . a kiss or somethin . But anyway , the story was awesome

Nicely done!

That was SO GOOD.

The story is well written, and I really love the

ending. But ( for me ) there is no way that Mac is capable

of hitting a woman, especially Stella.

But your story is great :)

This is a great story! I was actually really inspired by it and finally started to write a fanfic of my own. Thank you so much for inspiring me! and Keep up the good work!

Wow...I had a feeling that Claire would be involved somehow, but this story was incredibly powerful. Excellent work!

Keep Rockin'!

Dylan

awesome story!

I really liked this, though I can't imagine Mac ever raising his hand to a woman. But the end was great, and the butterfly pendant was a nice touch. Nice work. :)

This is lovely. So touching! I really loved it.