Great start. This should be an interesting story.

Thanks for this chapter

great chapter

Wow...those were both amazing, i loved this listen to the rain. Loved this song, am totally going to have to download it. Well done!

Well, it's a decent fic. It took me a few hours to read and I don't even WANT to imagine how much research it took you to be able to hold all these references together without someone with nothing better to do picking them apart strand by strand.

I do have a few complaints- your chapter lengths are so unpredictable! Especially this last one- the song is actually longer than the actual chapter itself! I know what it's like to get a head rush of inspiration from a song, but I'd rather have twenty-five long chapters instead of fifty short ones.

It's really hard to keep all these new characters straight, too. I want to like the story, but I'm really confused. In all... 6.5 out of 10.

great chapter i'f forgotten about this story can't wait to see wht happens

do you know i actually have a scorecard going with this story, excellent work! I love this one. Love Kota in it. The scorching, that was priceless. I can't wait to find out more about this Aquarius.

Excellent work!

I've been getting confused with all these Sailors and meangins any whatnot...but tis still fun to read this story. Was Selenity not worried that Serenity was bound for something greater? The Fairy had a kind of Prophecy when she spoke to the child Serenity. And Selenity was not phased.

This is an interesting story. I like it. I love back history on things. Anyway, I don't get who the father of the StarLights was. Want to sum it up for me?

Excellent as always! I really liked it! Great job! I can't wait for more!

great chapter i had to read the last chapter to remember what happened can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work

Hi, sorry about not reading for awhile. Anyway, this chapter was awesome, as usual. Later.

PS: I read and reviewed this using the Wii, 1 more reason to love it!

great chapter

very intesting chapter...reflective of the song in a very interesting way, I can't wait for more! Update soon!

very intriguing chapter, kinda bizare but fascintating, Starr and Kota kinda remind me in a weird way of Xena and Gabrielle from Xena: Warrior Princess...

Update soon!