Reviews for Strange Occurences

Reviews For: Strange Occurences

Xoni Newcomer 2005-03-23 ch 4, anon.	abuseNot a bad story in the end, although it's somewhat confusing. At the end I didn't fully get which parts were dream and which parts were reality. And, as fas as I know, the little demon you mentioned can't create illusions, so how can it make Ranma dream exactly what it wants?
Baron Hausenpheffer 2005-03-20 ch 4,	abuseWhoah... Sure didn't see that one coming! From the looks of things, I assume that Ryoga and the Cat Cafe crew are okay, but the Tendo household is about to get really messy (and not just because Kasumi quit cleaning). For what it's worth, this is probably my favorite story of yours yet. The plot was really original; it's rare to find a Ranma 1/2 horror story, to say the least. I don't understand why you seem so bummed out in the last chapter's author notes, though. All of your reviews look positive to me. You didn't receive any oily letters, did you...? Heh heh. About the ending... Kasumi's reign of terror might end before it ever truly begins. I sincerely doubt that a total freak of nature such as Happosai could be brought low by a mere butcher knife. Once Kasumi's back is turned, the old pervert will probably hop out of the noose, pull out the knife, and... cut all her clothes off or something. ^_^ To summarize: great job!
Baron Hausenpheffer 2005-03-20 ch 3,	abuseThis was a very good chapter; it really ties everything together (with the exception of "whodunnit?") and is well-written to boot. You did a good job of inserting a little humor without making everything seem out of whack; I especially liked "Nabiki the She-Octopus". Hahahaha! I have only one piece of advice to offer: don't make Ranma say/think "I'm smarter than everyone thinks I am" quite so much. That fact is pretty apparent from how you portrayed his thought processes, and it makes him sound a tad conceited besides. Otherwise, great job! I'm gonna read the last chapter in just a second here...
The Gandhara 2005-03-18 ch 4, anon.	abuseWhoa! This was really, really creepy. I'm not sure what to think about the story itself, but I can say for sure that you managed to create the atmosphere of a horror movie.
Baron Hausenpheffer 2005-03-17 ch 2,	abuseGeez, you weren't kidding about the "dark" thing, were you? Mr. Scaly-Green is among the deceased, and Kodachi doesn't look far behind. There's a little OOC-ness here and there, but by and large you're doing a fantastic job of keeping them THIS in-character (switching from a comedy to a thriller is no easy job). In fact, my only real complaint is that I disagree about Kuno being a "pansy", at least when compared to Kodachi (that "watermelon" training boosted sword-boy's power somethin' fierce). Really fantastic stuff, all-in-all; the way this is going, this could be your best story yet! Toodles!
brindani 2005-03-16 ch 4,	abuseAt last! Another Ranma/Ukyo fic. There are not nearly enough of them out there. This one was really good. Though a little odd, it was still very satisfying. Hope to see more stories soon! brindani
Lord of the Pit 2005-03-14 ch 1,	abuseNice thus far, but update is needed for a truely accurate feel for this story.
Xoni Newcomer 2005-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt was very well written, but it was really weird. Is this a one-shot or will you continue it? I really don't get what happened to Ukyou or what was the deal with the oily note.
Dassadec 2005-03-13 ch 1,	abuseDo you mean prologue, epilogues are at the end of a story. Other than that, it is a good start on a story. I like dark fiction and hope that this fic will continue.
Baron Hausenpheffer 2005-03-12 ch 1,	abuseI'm back. (For now, at least.) Hahaha... if there's one thing I can't resist, it's a well-written "Ranma-Ukyo" fic, so you've already earned points in my book! Seriously, though, this is extremely good stuff. I LOVE the first-person viewpoint, and I strongly encourage you to keep it. This fic also has a great "whodunnit?" vibe to it that will keep me (and most anyone else with much curiosity) reading. My lone complaint is that Akane was a tad too evil, but I suppose that can be explained away by the "dark" nature of this story. Please don't have her be behind Ukyo's near-suicide, however, because that would be just too much. Anyway, this is shaping up to be an excellent fic, and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Later! (P.S. HO-LEE CRAP you are prolific! Where in the name of all that is fictional do you find time to write this much?! I have envy! Oh, well... if you can, do. Right?)

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