I really liked your story. I was shocked about the sudden end of the dream - so when I've read your statement in the end I continued to read the whole story
and that was a pretty great erotic story

and the pairing is really nice :-)

even if my english is not perfekt (I'm german) so it's diffucult to judge - but I thought your way of writing is great

and the story itself was of course totally sexy ^/^
especially because it was described so detailed and extensive

I'm glad that I can read such good stories - even if they are not in my language. But there are almost no samurai deeper kyo fanfics in german :-( (how sad, but it's not very popular here)


so I just wanted to tell you: "awesome story, keep writing stuff like that" ;-)

Aws. well written C:

It was a bit disappointing that it ended like that, but I still enjoyed it enough to read it again.

was it really so grphic that you couldnt post it? ive seen much more graphic stuff than this on here...well neway im gonna go read the whole thigns cause i really like this part

Wow, I first read this ages ago; I can't believe I never reviewed. Despite my Akira/Yuya bias, I'm still clinging to the shreds of my love for Shinrei/Yuya.

nice! the link doesn't work though, can you tell me it? thanks

Hardy har har! Hmm...this seems so much more shorter than the aff version, hehe.
Anyways, I curse myself for not reviewing this sooner. I love it and I love Shinrei-he's so cute, ne? You're a great author and this story deserves much more attention that it didn't get.

Yeah, I know. Saisei almost killed Akira in vol 17! It ** me off 'cause he's one of my favourites and he always has it so tough. Can't blame Saisei though, she was only tryin' ta protect Shinny.
Sasuke: That has happened at every gate so far! They get you in a pity-pitch.
Saishi didn't.
Sasuke: Yeah, but she's a dumb bi-
Don't swear, the nazis will come! Great fic Alli! ^-^

Yay another one!! That was great!! Are you going to write anymore SDK fics?

hi love your story but i want to read everything but i couldnt get in ,do you mind sending it to me: shinigamimaru@
arigatou^_^x

Hmm, spoilers galore, and downright lemony. Was there ever really any hints of Shinrei/Yuya in the manga? I wouldn't know, as i'm limited to the U.S. released version of the series. Dammit, I want volume 12 to come out right now! As for that "doh" moment... (imagines the SDK guys' faces and laughs out loud)

Salute!
The Narrator

You know, now that I re-read it again, I find it awesome that Shinrei would understand Yuya that well - that he would dream of her responses so perfectly XDXD Guess he's attracted to that 'fire' in her ;)

*fans herself* And it's just as HOT re-reading it a third time XDXDXD You just have this way of writing this scene, and Shinrei is one sexy SOB. *drools*

Remember, MAKE THE NEXT ONE AKIRA/YUYA. :D

Very nice. Even though I'm a die hard Kyo/Yuya fan, I don't have a huge problem with other pairings. Especially since Kyo is chock full of hot guys and half of them seem to find her attractive, I can see a whole crap-load of pairings with her in it. The most obvious ones being Akira and Benitora.

I'm still worried about Sakuya though, since it seems like Yuya has stiff competition in her. Sigh.

Anyways, keep up the good work and I'll look forward to more.

Oh I like this a lot. The exploration into Shinrei's mind is commendable and long overdue. There are distinct hints of his affections for Yuya and you've portrayed them so well. The dream sequence was tastefully written (the water tendril was a creative usage for the moment). So glad to see more of your talented writing. *hurrah*