I thought that I'd already reviewed this, guess not and apologies for the delay. I like this (Calhoun and Shelby are my favorites). Looking forward to seeing what comes next.

i thought it was really good keep going

Ooh. This is shaping up to be a really good adventure story... I'm looking forward to future chapters! :D

Also, if you have a LJ, there's a NF community where you could post this fic. We'd love to have new members, especially fic writers!

(I'm tangerrine.)

Oh... I am intrigued. I haven't read any of the books, other than a few TNG books written while the show was still running, so I'm assuming that "New Frontier" is a book series? I really like the two characters; you do a good job getting into their heads! This is really well written, too, and you keep your pace very well. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens.

This is very interesting, I've added it to my C2 archive and look forward to the rest of the story.

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Lyda Mae (RavenDove) Huff

are you gonna write more this is really good

Not a long chapter, but you've already caught my attention! Calhoun is by far my favorite Starfleet captain! I can hardly wait to see what you've got planned for my two favorite captains...