very cute

o.0 Oh, my God! I love it!

That was nice, although a little too suggestive for my taste. o0

Warning would be nice before adding a story to the C2. lol

And Vincent is hot.

ok i have decided to generalize already and say i really like your poetry. i just read a review before though and i agree, try some free verse. sometime the words flow better without having to force a rhyme. oh yeah and iv decided to write some tifaxvincent, youve inspired me :)

wow very sensual Faerlyte... lol... very cute poem.

Aw this is really sweet write more!

Cute. You're not too bad at poetry, you just have to remember: it doesn't necessarily have to rhyme. But the rhyme works here.

~Cendrillo

Wow you must be on a roll. Great job!! Ahh spring time weather seems to get us all in a bit of a tizzy doesn't it? I adore spring almost as much as I do fall.
I just wanted to make a short comment and tell your how much I've enjoyed both poems you've recently placed here and I'd love to read more if you are up for sharing any more.

Be Well

I like this one too. "You. Bed. Now." Glomps Vincent. This is so cute... A playful Tifa. Very sweet...

hehehs. I like the ending, it was funny. Your poetry is getting better! Keep up the great work!