 MichaelaTheUchiha 2009-06-23 . chapter 1But what's Sasuke going to do about a sword now? o.O |
 clairelovesedward 2008-07-30 . chapter 1That was really good. I thought it was quite in character. Love the way you finished it, not too corny, and symbolic. |
 hauntful yay 2008-05-18 . chapter 1Did I already review this thing? I don't remember... but I'll review (again?) anyway! Whoo, go symbolism! I like how you incorporate the necklace and the sword- they're very... I don't know. Sharp symbols? Whatever they are, adds lots to the story. Plus, I like how you stayed true to Sasuke, and the messed up syndrome he has. All the characters were really realistic. Great job! |
 timme 2008-04-26 . chapter 1 ack! go back and get the damn sword! still, great fic. |
 False-Image 2008-04-15 . chapter 1Well, now you get to be on my favourite authors too =) Beautifully written! Great great work! Keep it up! |
 ArgyBargy 2008-04-04 . chapter 1Lovely. Gorgeous, in fact. And that last line is just perfect. C: |
 Crazy Sardines 2008-04-04 . chapter 1Very nice. Good job. And to think it was even unedited. :D |
 Kaarsis 2008-02-26 . chapter 1 Hell no, no criticism. That was really good. Though, technically, I don't think it was SasuNaru, could just be really really really (really)... good friends. Anyway, loved the characterization (was spot on) and the final line was an absolutely perfect conculusion to an already great fic.
Good job
*goes to read more of ur stuff* |
 yumeniai 2008-01-21 . chapter 1aw, that's so sweet! You described everything so well! And his thoughts are so completly sasuke! |
 DMLpacker 2007-12-30 . chapter 1Normally I don't like present tense stories, but all of yours are so skillfully woven! |
 Riyoku-kun 2007-09-02 . chapter 1Love it so much. =D
Thank you for contributing to the small but growing number of NaruSasu fanfics. ^^ |
 Standupdoutei 2007-09-01 . chapter 1This was so nicely written! i really loved it. Youshould continue this some how...^.^ you are an awesom writer!! |
 Kinkatia 2007-09-01 . chapter 1Ach! I love it! Expecially that very last sentence. ^_^ Yayness! |
 sasukichan 2007-08-14 . chapter 1 err... i don't get it? *sheepish smile* |
 susa 2007-08-02 . chapter 1 This was just excellent, one of the best one shots I've read. |