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| Syvah 2006-10-06 ch 7,  | abuseReally enjoyed the back-stories, they were very well written. I'm curious though, if Sara and Greg both worked at the San Francisco Lab, why didn't they know each other when Sara arrived in Vegas in 20? |
| Frizance 2005-05-15 ch 7, | abuseGreat fic I like it alot. |
| Casandra 2005-04-02 ch 7, anon. | abuseThat should so be in an episode of CSI! heheh Very nice explanation for the tension between Sara and Grissom. Yummy! Cas |
| CSIFan4Life 2005-03-21 ch 7, | abuseThis fic was great. I really liked how you went into their pasts. I think it would be cool if you did some sort of sequal. ~Jackie~ |
| Woodstock99 2005-03-21 ch 7, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this and I loved the last line, because it really fits with the way Grissom usually behaves. However, I choose to believe that Grissom and Sara didn't have a fling, or even a kiss before. I think it would make it more special when (if?) they'll finally get together on the show. But that's what fanfic is for ;-) |
| Brelli 2005-03-21 ch 7, | abuseI agree with you that the last chap was the best and I loved the lot of them. You should seriously consider a sequel, perhaps based on the end... Anyways, I loved it! |
| DaVinci13 2005-03-20 ch 7, | abuseYeah, this was the best chapter. Grissom's messed up and confused as always, has no idea what he's doing or what he needs to do. Poor guy. This was a great story - very different from anything anyone else has ever done, and interesting - it kept me wanting to read more, just to find out what who you'd write about next. Thanks a lot, and I can't wait to see what you're going to write next. |
| DaVinci13 2005-03-20 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter - I love how you described Greg's feelings, and what he was thinking when he met everybody. Great job - now I'm going to go read Grissom's chapter. Yay! |
| krysalys73 2005-03-20 ch 7, | abuseWow. O.o Damn, that was exquisite. Now, if *only* that really happened... Brilliant story, m'dear. Only one editorial thing to point out - one of the most common errors in writing: the mixing up of loose and lose. This has definitely gone into my favorites. -}-@ Krys |
| krysalys73 2005-03-20 ch 6, | abuseWOO-HOO! *chants* Go Greg, go Greg, go Greggo! Excellent job. Every chapter full of something I wouldn't have expected to read or know about. -}-@ Krys |
| KleeNut214 2005-03-20 ch 7, | abuseAugh, so good. Loved it! Yay. |
| Camilla Sandman 2005-03-20 ch 4, | abuseLovely little scenes of life and refreshingly different, too. Well-written. I particulary liked Warrick's chapter, as he's quite an unexplored character on the show. |
| Review1234 2005-03-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed your story, how you did the different points of view with realilistic events. I'm always reading relationship stories, and this was a nice change. Thanks for writing! |
| krysalys73 2005-03-20 ch 5, | abuseYeowtch. And so began the years of Helen poisoning Ellie's mind against her father. Jim *so* didn't deserve the deck he'd been dealt. *sighs heavily* My heart aches for that poor man. Excellent chapter. You have such a wonderful way of weaving the stories. -}-@ Krys |
| DaVinci13 2005-03-20 ch 5, | abuseThat was a really good chapter - God, I hate that woman! Poor Brass. And to think Ellie grew up to hate him. Sigh. Anyways, I liked this a lot, and I'm looking forward to Grissom's chapter. :) |