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| 3DG girl 2008-07-15 ch 1,  | abusedude! I LURVED THAT ! SakuTen?! I have NEVER read one of those, but this was UTTERLY FANTASTIC ! it was totally well written and i didnt catch any mistakes ! and i lurved the secretly and not so secretly. That was awesome (: wicked fic, 2 thumbs up (: good job :D |
| sillymail 2006-11-05 ch 1, | abuse:) |
| BioDragon 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseSweet! Tenten needs the shoujo-ai love Awesome! |
| TheShamanMaster 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseshort and sweet! |
| Aviane 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseKawaii^^ wish it were longer though... But defenetly a big + for Sakura/Tenten shoujo ai, We need more of these!! Thx and keep up the good work;) |
| Blood Stained Sorceress 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good and not to mention my first yuri story! lol |
| Bramble Elfglitter 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story. I love this pairing and can not believe that it is used so little. Please continue this story! |
| Angstluver 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI think you have found yourself a new fan. ^-^ |
| Details 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. Shojo-ai is so refreshing to read. |
| Vampire Toy 2005-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing, well done with their characters :D |
| Klayter McCabe 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. This pairing would never have occurred to me, but your handling of it here makes it seem so natural that I'm surprised I haven't seen it more often. I'm going to have to go through and read the rest of your stuff now – you’re a really enjoyable writer. |
| the-bird-flies 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI love it! (In the background--"You were once my one companion"--Phantom of the Opera has perfect timing.) I find it odd that people can be so obsessive about yaoi/shonen ai when they seem to hate yuri. It is basically the same issue and should be addressed the same way. But anyway (is now babbling on about rights, etc.), this was extremely awesome, and I hope that you write more! MKRA |
| deathrosekitty 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseo i luv this! its sweet!! lata |
| Fantastical Queen Ebony Bla... 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved TenTen in this fic. Yay for not-so-popular yuri pairings! Personally I like HinataTenTen better, but meh. You did a great job. |
| Sintari 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseA very nice little ficlet. Since Tenten is so underdeveloped in the series, it is often hard for me to get a handle on her character. You did a great job characterizing her in just a few words. And I adore your descriptions. This passage - "Ever since she was small, Tenten has known that names give meaning to their object. The girl lying next to her is perfect proof: she is perhaps not the most beautiful thing that Tenten has ever seen, but she is close enough to stand out. That morning, Sakura was loud, sure of herself, shouting orders to the rest of the girls and not taking any argument. But in the dark, Sakura seems to wilt; her head is down, eyes closed, and the moon highlights every hollow in her pretty face." - was striking! Very thoughtful. I hope this wasn't a one-shot. I would love to see more! |